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Lava Lamp

Forbidden touch Among the reddish light Burning sensation Chase-

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C T

Date: 2/20/2016 6:20:00 PM

edit: (Burn Sensation)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/20/2016 4:14:00 PM

Hi CT, I like your first, a Senryu, I see the vision. Your style is simple and straightforward in this write. Funny thing, never seen a Lava Lamp in my life but i am picturing it now in my mind, through your words. This is a little gem my friend. I look forward to reading more from you. Have a good day....Vlad.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/16/2016 10:56:00 PM

A warm welcome to Poetry Soup! This is an amazing site where talented poets are wonderful at leaving comments, especially if you return them. I enjoyed your well written senryu. Aloha, Connie

Joseph May

Date: 12/28/2015 10:52:00 PM

Very good senryu CT....

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/16/2015 7:07:00 PM

A nice senryu Chase. Welcome to the soup. love phyl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/11/2015 12:25:00 PM

A belated welcome to the soup. I believe you will fit in nicely.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/11/2015 12:22:00 PM

I always wanted a lava light! I used to watch my dad's for hours.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 9/10/2015 10:42:00 PM

Hi Chase: Thanks for the comment and I like your style of poetry. My Compliments.

Lycia Harding

Date: 8/16/2015 1:30:00 PM

Ooooh... I like this! Cool vibe in a nutshell. Good job, CT!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2015 10:26:00 AM

Chase, I hope you are having a nice day! soupmail.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/14/2015 12:15:00 PM

What a great first offering Chase...Welcome

Jan Allison

Date: 8/14/2015 5:02:00 AM

love the imagery here Chase:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/13/2015 3:48:00 AM

Enticing senryu..Welcome to ps Chase : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2015 9:41:00 PM

this is quite descriptive, chase. I like it!

Skat A

Date: 7/27/2015 12:03:00 PM

Chase, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

C T
Date: 8/4/2015 2:30:00 PM

hugs

Jill Spagnola

Date: 7/27/2015 12:39:00 AM

Still love those lamps! :), jill

C T
Date: 8/4/2015 2:30:00 PM

you know exactly what I'm talking about :)