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Loneliness hurting I started flirting Inviting her to the dance Downhearted When we soon parted Romance never given a chance. The walls that protect me Also confine me I'm afraid those walls must fall Getting frantic Feeling romantic I must answer my hearts call. First I must find her She's out there waiting for me I'm searching In the hope of unearthing The girl who will share my destiny. Last time Was the wrong time Before we started We were done Next time Might be the right time May be this time She'll be the one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/12/2015 3:10:00 PM
I adore this poem and very much relate to ...knowing THE person is out there, somewhere ... CayCay
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Date: 1/29/2015 3:22:00 AM
Never give up on love, for it will catch you when you least expect it. I enjoyed reading your romantic poem Darren.
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Date: 12/31/2014 6:05:00 AM
Dear Darren: Thank you for the support my friend. Here's wishing you and your loved ones A Happy New Year filled with peace, joy and love. All my best wishes on the last day of 2014, Leon.
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Date: 11/5/2014 2:56:00 PM
Hi Darren..Miss your poetry,even your collabs with Jan.Miss your recipes,and your advice of where to visit in Uk.Come back soon..The soupers miss you.
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Date: 10/12/2014 11:52:00 PM
Darren, are you ever coming back to us ? I came here to tell you that your friends here really miss you. Please come back soon!!
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Date: 8/4/2014 6:45:00 PM
Hi you guys my first chapbook of Poetry is now available! I am really excited to be published and I will keep going and creating more work. Currently working on my next book which will be full length. Go check it out! https://www.createspace.com/4418272
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Date: 6/23/2014 12:09:00 PM
One day you will finally find the lady of your dreams and find true happiness Darren. She will be one special lucky lady to share her life with you. Hugs as ever Jan xx
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Date: 6/23/2014 10:26:00 AM
Oh it does suck to be lonely, but you write of it so well, hugs my friend :)
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Date: 6/23/2014 9:49:00 AM
She is probably staring you in the eye and you don't even know it....Darren be patient, you are a good man, the right one will come along at the right time....Tim
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