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the world is round I know not why with every turn my baby cried I knew not how nor what to say too long aground I ran astray now life’s a dance a wish gone bad it takes your breath it makes you mad but not mad as this thirst for you that turned these lips from red to blue the water's cold as cold can be the winter winds came down to see once brilliant eyes like summer days slowly grow dim and slip away

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Date: 5/21/2024 11:59:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/23/2018 1:07:00 AM
Wow such a charming poem, poignance in eloquence, the longing and all so poetic and rhyming superbly. Kudos for this great poem and it ought to cheer you up the talent you have. Long may you write. Sending happy new yr wishes fav poet, Plz do review/comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 2/2/2018 9:03:00 AM
A very sad poem Ralph... Death is something that will come to us all...
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