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Last Lust Lorn Lament

i'm abandoning abandon it's left me nowhere 24/06/18 Brenda Chiri's Abandon 2 - Poetry Contest

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Susan Gentry

Date: 7/27/2018 6:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Brilliant!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/27/2018 9:31:00 PM

Thank you Susan! :)) xomo!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/27/2018 5:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your heartfelt win, Maureen . I enjoyed reading this well written Senryu with great imagery. Hugs Eve

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/27/2018 9:30:00 PM

Thank you Eve, I enjoyed this one in particular ;p Hugs! xomo

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/25/2018 4:54:00 PM

Wow...very clever, Maureen. So much in so few words! Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/26/2018 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Sandra! :)) xomo!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/25/2018 8:53:00 AM

Clever, congrats on top spot.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/25/2018 9:49:00 AM

Thank you Richard :) xomo!

John Lawless

Date: 7/25/2018 7:20:00 AM

Just don't be reckless about it....

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/25/2018 7:40:00 AM

You get giggles galore for that one! ;p xomo!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/25/2018 5:07:00 AM

I don't no how are you come up with these brief but incredible poems Mo. But keep it up! I loved this! Congratulations on your first place win! : )

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/25/2018 7:39:00 AM

I couldn't say, just that my brain works that way ;) Thank you so much Connie! Your encouragement and support a blessing cherished always <3 xomo!

Roy Pett

Date: 6/28/2018 5:34:00 AM

You will always be somewhere, because you are in our hearts and minds, brilliant brilliant senryu Maureen. :))

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/28/2018 6:20:00 AM

Well that puts this grey overcast day in warm new light, so sweet to say, thank you Roy. xomo ~<3

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/26/2018 11:58:00 AM

Love it Maureen...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/26/2018 1:39:00 PM

Thank you Charlie :) xomo!

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/25/2018 9:39:00 PM

Where is that???... About time...All the best Maureen

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/26/2018 7:16:00 AM

Giggles ;) A lovely day to my friend! xomo

Eve Roper

Date: 6/25/2018 8:26:00 PM

Oh, very profound, Maureen, :) hugs eve

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/26/2018 7:15:00 AM

Thank you Eve! :) xomo!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 6/25/2018 6:50:00 PM

very clever, Maureen

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/26/2018 7:15:00 AM

Thank you Agnes :)) xomo!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/25/2018 5:20:00 PM

Ditto Silent One's comment --- from a Real Nowhere Man, sitting in his nowhere land...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/26/2018 7:14:00 AM

Saving all your nowhere plans, for nobody huh? Have you seen a Jim Jarmusch film called Dead Man? Two main characters are "William Blake" and "Nobody" ;) xomo!

Silent One

Date: 6/25/2018 8:32:00 AM

Clever... but at least nowhere is somewhere...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/25/2018 8:36:00 AM

Lol! Too true ;p xomo!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/25/2018 6:55:00 AM

Love this one. Went straight to my faves list.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/25/2018 7:53:00 AM

Delighted! Thank you so much Caren! :) xomo!

Anil Deo

Date: 6/25/2018 6:44:00 AM

Intriguing. You do seem to be having fun with poetry ... Hallelujah. shalom, shalom

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/25/2018 7:52:00 AM

I do have maybe a little too much fun with words, amen for poetry! Thank you Anil, shalom :) xomo

Lyric Man

Date: 6/25/2018 5:42:00 AM

Maureen.. it's rare when brilliance and humor wed. However, you just pulled it off!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/25/2018 6:17:00 AM

Thank you Lyric Man! I'm never quite sure where I'm landing on the cheese/whiz scale ;) xomo!

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/25/2018 5:40:00 AM

You have company!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/25/2018 6:17:00 AM

Never too young to give up ;p xomo!