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Last Goodbyes

We're gathered here together... to say our last goodbye My time on earth is limited... my spirit soon will fly In my time of living... many memories have accrued For all the love I've been given... my heart is full of gratitude Each of you, my children... our bloodline do share You can rely on this for strength... protect it and take care My grandchildren and great You're loved beyond we show Our heritage is in you... Live a life of faith... live it slow Oh, love of my life, my darling... It's only you and I You've given me love in every way... Watched me grow and fly You're a loving, proud, gentle man... provider and dad Being outside will heal you if you're feeling sad We've talked before, my dear... when it's my time I'm okay A spiritual awakening years ago... changed how I live each day Be at peace, I leave you now... It's been a wonderful ride Live your life, I have no doubt... We'll rejoin on the other side July 14 2018 August 21, 2018 My Muse, Mortal Contest By Gregory Barden Fourth Place

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Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 8/23/2018 3:29:00 AM

Congratulations, Susan on your win. A lovely touching verse indeed.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/24/2018 9:12:00 AM

Thank you!

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/22/2018 2:39:00 PM

So beautifully expressed, Susan, so full of love and inspiration for family and faith that we all meet again. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/24/2018 9:11:00 AM

Thank you, Sandra. Congratulations on your #1.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2018 3:03:00 AM

A most beautiful goodbye expressed with tenderness and love for family and gratitude for life. Outstanding Susan! Congratulations on your Third Placement! ; )

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/24/2018 9:11:00 AM

Thank you, Connie.

Francesca Pappadogiannis

Date: 8/22/2018 12:12:00 AM

What beautiful words shared for all in ones' life :) I loved this piece, Susan, mad me feel saddened yet complete knowing that we all rejoin on the other side! Congratulations on your win.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/22/2018 2:36:00 AM

Thank you so much for this comment. To know someone feels what I am trying to express means so much. I appreciate you taking time to comment.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/21/2018 9:22:00 PM

Back with congrats on your win in the contest, Susan! ~ Gershon

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/21/2018 9:01:00 PM

This is just gorgeous, Susan, and not only touched my heart, but did so with exquisite imagery and phrasing and structure ... it hooked me from the first line and held me, and is a wonderful poem in every respect. You should be very proud! Sincere congratulations on your FOURTH PLACE in the 'My Muse, Mortal' Poetry Contest - blessings, my friend!

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/22/2018 2:30:00 AM

Thank you! There were many great entries, you had a grand job. I so appreciate your comment and you for sponsoring this contest. I am pleased and honored to be on your list of winners. Blessings to you and yours.

Virginia Waters

Date: 8/21/2018 5:14:00 PM

this poem touched my soul - so good to hear of those families with such deep feelings for each other. Thank you and best wishes on winning place.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/22/2018 2:27:00 AM

Thank you for such a lovely comment.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/21/2018 4:53:00 PM

This made me smile deeply Susan, such a lovely write. Congratulations on your win! xomo :)

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/22/2018 2:26:00 AM

Thank you, Maureen. A sweet comment.

Curtis Moorman

Date: 8/21/2018 3:04:00 AM

Susan, you are truly amazing! I am not the only one who feels this way. You are one of the most sincere, caring, loving and all around good people that I have ever had the pleasure to be associated with. Thank you for this beautiful poem, and congratulations on your win.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/21/2018 3:50:00 PM

Oh my! What an awesome comment! I appreciate you so much.Thank you. My eyes are watering. There are so many people here with kind hearts and you always touch mine.

Kevin Lawrence

Date: 7/22/2018 5:26:00 AM

Wow, wow. Powerful! Pure truth. Thank you, and thank you for your prolific contributions to the art of poetry.

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/22/2018 10:30:00 AM

Why thank you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/15/2018 5:38:00 AM

A beautiful write Susan,I could just picture the scene, someone in their final hours speaking to their loved ones. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/15/2018 9:34:00 PM

Thanks, Tom. Appreciate your comment.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/15/2018 1:49:00 AM

"Good night, goodnight. Parting is such sweet sorrow. I'll say goodnight until tonight becomes tomorrow" The life you live will say more than any words. Touching write, Susan:) Should do very well!

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/15/2018 9:33:00 PM

"Romeo, Romeo, where art thou, Romeo?" :) That's all I know of that. Yes, I certainly agree. Thank you.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/14/2018 11:41:00 PM

Just love this one, Susan. So touching and truly heartfelt. … Just want to .that I am saying goodbye to P.S. for a lengthy break, … may or may not return. So, please accept my thanks for all of your support and encouragement over the past few months. Your kind of words have spurred me on. Best wishes always, Gershon

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/15/2018 8:55:00 PM

Thank you. Best wishes to you too. I will miss you. SoupMail

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/14/2018 8:39:00 PM

This is really quite well done! Congratulations! Aloha! Rico

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/15/2018 8:54:00 PM

Thank you.