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Lament not, oh worthy lama This life is but a dream Live in joy, free from fear stigma Things are not what they seem Childlike, given to play To rhythm divine sway Keeping ego at bay Be self-taught Lament not 13-December-2021 Quietus

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Date: 12/15/2021 12:07:00 PM
Your poem is truly breathtaking, Seeker, and showcased beautifully in your poetry form. Simply divine in every way. Congratulations for your poem being honored with POTD. A worthy and wonderful choice. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/15/2021 6:20:00 PM
Thank you Susan! So happy you liked the poem. The advantage of POTD or contest wins is that the underlying message is more widely read. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year in advance
Date: 12/14/2021 10:43:00 PM
Cograts on POTD Unseeking Seeker! Inspiring thoughts in this poem. Your friend, Bill
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Date: 12/15/2021 2:03:00 AM
Thank you dear Bill!
Date: 12/14/2021 9:16:00 PM
"Live in joy" You can, and that is such a wonderful feeling. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Congratulations Unseeking Seeker, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 12/15/2021 2:03:00 AM
Thank you Brandy, so happy you resonate!
Date: 12/14/2021 8:36:00 PM
Gosh. Forget to check POTD this a.m... So happy to see one of yours get the honor. Well-deserved, Seeker. Happiness and Light, Gershon
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Date: 12/14/2021 8:53:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Date: 12/14/2021 8:11:00 PM
A divine message Seeker. Congratulations on your very deserving POTD honor.
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Date: 12/14/2021 8:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie!
Date: 12/14/2021 3:42:00 PM
Thank you for this uplifting message. We can't get enough of this kind of energy. Well deserved poem of the day. Molly
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Date: 12/14/2021 6:00:00 PM
Thank you, Molly! So happy you enjoyed :)
Date: 12/14/2021 2:25:00 PM
excellent ink seeker , many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2021 5:59:00 PM
Thank you Jan! Happy New Year in advance!
Date: 12/14/2021 9:08:00 AM
Unseeking Seeker, congratulations on POTD. Happy Holidays
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Date: 12/14/2021 5:59:00 PM
Thank you Eve! Greetings of the season! Enjoy!
Date: 12/14/2021 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations U. Seeker!! I seeker I wish to be and strive to reach the space in which I too can sway ! Love your poem!!
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Date: 12/14/2021 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Mike! May the Divine Mother choose to vivify your energy body, as your heart desires!
Date: 12/14/2021 7:48:00 AM
"to rhythm divine sway"--very nicely done. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 12/14/2021 7:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, AWTRY!
Date: 12/14/2021 7:47:00 AM
Seeker, I love your poem and your created form and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 12/14/2021 7:54:00 AM
Thank you, Constance! Yes, I’m enjoying writing in the Quietus form. Wish you boundless joy!
Date: 12/14/2021 7:43:00 AM
Congrats on POTD :) God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 12/14/2021 7:52:00 AM
Thank you dear Gina! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year in advance!
Date: 12/14/2021 7:17:00 AM
"Keeping ego at bay" is the toughest. Your words are worthy of reading again and again. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 12/14/2021 7:37:00 AM
Thank you, Ann! Keeping ego at bay is indeed difficult for as long as we continue to believe we are only this mind-body and not soul eternal
Date: 12/14/2021 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. win. I love your line, "This life is but a dream." Time does fly by. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 12/14/2021 7:33:00 AM
A seemingly real, lifelike, lucid dream … thank you, dear Paula!
Date: 12/14/2021 6:07:00 AM
Beautiful use of the poetry form, Unseeking Seeker. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.!
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Date: 12/14/2021 6:28:00 AM
Thanks Milt! Yes, it’s heartening to see Quietus recognised :)
Date: 12/14/2021 5:18:00 AM
Big congrats on POTD, US. Glad to see your insightful poem recognized. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 12/14/2021 5:31:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! Happy New Year in advance
Date: 12/14/2021 4:44:00 AM
Words of wisdom, so well crafted in your own Quietus form ...Seeker. Hearty congratulations on your well deserved POTD honor... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 12/14/2021 5:30:00 AM
Thank you Anitha! Yes, I’m enjoying the Quietus form :)
Date: 12/14/2021 3:57:00 AM
Congrats for your POTD.
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Date: 12/14/2021 4:11:00 AM
Thanks Victor! Hope you are doing well
Date: 12/14/2021 2:45:00 AM
I enjoyed this. Well done.
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Date: 12/14/2021 3:56:00 AM
Happy you enjoyed, VC
Date: 12/14/2021 2:41:00 AM
Back with congratulations seeker, on a well deserved POTD, all for the right reasons, cheers David
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Date: 12/14/2021 3:55:00 AM
Thanks David!
Date: 12/14/2021 2:03:00 AM
I am so pleased to see your poem receive poem of the day. Positive thoughts instead of negative ones, Seeker. Cheers to you!
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Date: 12/14/2021 3:55:00 AM
Thank you Lin! :)
Date: 12/14/2021 12:34:00 AM
Back with congratulations US on POTD, a well deserved honour, have a great day. Tom
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Date: 12/14/2021 12:44:00 AM
Thanks for your encouragement Tom!
Date: 12/13/2021 3:16:00 PM
Be self thought, Lament not, where’d you find the words Seeker, impressive penning, cheers David
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Date: 12/13/2021 8:24:00 PM
Thanks David! Happy you enjoyed
Date: 12/13/2021 8:13:00 AM
Words to live by US, a verse of wisdom. Tom
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Date: 12/13/2021 8:44:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 12/13/2021 6:32:00 AM
Exceptional advice, Seeker. I've faved this one.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/13/2021 6:43:00 AM
You're very welcome.
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/13/2021 6:37:00 AM
Thank you, Lin!

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