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Not sure what it is about this land that grabs you but I was grabbed long ago. Trip ends today, last night I stayed up late, sipping remaining whisky as the red sun set neath hill's dark shoulders. Crisp morning up before six lake like glass rustle up the fire and make coffee. Rest of camp sound asleep so I solo cast the back bay release a hammer handle then troll the north shore into a freshening wind nothing. Move out to deeper water perhaps a morning walleye but the wind’s up, and the sparkling sun puts fish down still nothing. End of lake head back cast the shoreline snag a bush retrieve the lure test line – it snaps. Retie, change lures, Tom got a good fish in these narrows but today nothing. Ignore my watch, change to a deeper lure last point, a satisfying tug good pike – strong fish open water, use net she’s mine. Paddle back to camp with fresh fillets for home and memories of when the lake and I were one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/2/2017 8:22:00 PM
There is such Peace in your words that 'my words' are unnecessary. You express a sublime serenity that brings back fond memories. The first verse says it All:-) Beautiful writing, fave 7+ lynnxxx
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 4/3/2017 10:51:00 AM
Thanks Lynn
Date: 7/11/2015 3:11:00 AM
Dave :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/11/2015 8:05:00 AM
Thanks SKAT. Is it coincidence or fate that this show up just as I'm preparing for another canoe trip?
Date: 7/11/2015 1:23:00 AM
I enjoyed spending this moment with you Dave. Congrats on having this featured!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/11/2015 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Connnie, I'm always happy to share a moment. Dave
Date: 5/18/2014 10:21:00 PM
Truly enjoyed this write about fishing. I have not been fishing in about 12 years now. Gave up hunting about 7 years ago. Your words brought back many pleasant memories. Thanks.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 5/19/2014 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Robert, good to know it touched a chord.
Date: 4/30/2014 5:31:00 AM
Very brilliant and enjoyable write on fishing. Congrats on the win, Dave
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 4/30/2014 10:22:00 PM
Thanks Dr. M
Date: 4/30/2014 4:59:00 AM
Great poem Aberfoyle ! Yes we must ignore watch sometimes while we r enjoying what we r good at , congrats on win !
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 4/30/2014 10:25:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma - yes sometimes time away from our busy schedules, computer and much of life's business can over new insights.
Date: 4/29/2014 10:36:00 PM
sure enjoyed this one..nice ending, when you and the lake were one. Congrats. BG
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 4/30/2014 10:28:00 PM
Thanks Barbara, ice out is late here, but the waters are open I hope to be back to one soon.
Date: 4/29/2014 8:34:00 PM
Congratulations on winning this contest. This poem is superb.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 4/29/2014 10:03:00 PM
Thanks Ivo. I'm glad it grabbed something in you.
Date: 4/29/2014 4:59:00 PM
Aberfoyle Dave, . Congratulations, in Caleb's "Gone Fishin'" contest.. always~ LINDA
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 4/29/2014 8:19:00 PM
Linda, Thanks, as always your comments are most appreciated. Dave
Date: 3/2/2014 12:37:00 PM
I lived in Parry Sound when I was a kid. I had a teacher by the name of Mr. Lake who helped set me on the right path.
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Date: 3/2/2014 11:03:00 AM
You describe a beautiful scenario here.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/2/2014 11:27:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 2/27/2014 10:05:00 AM
This makes me think of my former home in Northern Ontario. I was born in Kirkland lake.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/2/2014 11:29:00 AM
Thanks, the lake in question in N of Parry Sound but well S of Kirkland Lake. WE are privileged to have these lakes still available.
Date: 2/19/2014 10:48:00 AM
- A truly beautiful natural pearl - enjoy it! - Thank you for sharing this beautiful image in your thoughts and words of Roger. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/2/2014 11:30:00 AM
Thanks for your comments.

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