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Lady In the Water

elongated shimmers reflect the water of movement on her face, life swirls around brushing past unseeing she stares into liquid pools of light blinded as a supernova peeks out from inside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/5/2014 8:33:00 AM
haunting free verse! a watery death and a rising! Light & Love
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Date: 12/8/2012 4:55:00 AM
thanks for the comments ladies they were much appeciated hugs Jayne
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Date: 12/7/2012 6:14:00 AM
A good poem Jayne ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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