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Thankless job, I think watching as Thurman tries to teach the young man The lad sitting up on the tractor like a proud young pup is full of piss and vinegar half the time not listening and half the time telling Thurman how much he already knows... As Thurman patiently slumps his still-sturdy but ungainly frame against the tractor fingers strumming his red suspenders a good-natured grin slowly spreading across his grizzled face gleaming behind think glasses I see a glint of soft amusement at this grandiose greenhorn Thurman has lived through the Great Depression, and then the horror of hand-combat in World War II one of three from his unit to make it through- so there is nothing this little ingrate can possibly do or say to break Thurman's composure today he remains uncommonly calm and utterly unflappable a small chuckle slipping out every now and then And while the young man boasts and blusters on about his plans for next week Thurman is mostly quiet, until at length, asked about his plans “Lord willing- and the creek don't rise...” he begins, knowing how much could change by then

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Date: 11/10/2018 6:22:00 PM
Hello Rhona, thank you for crea\ting this poem. I enjoyed this poem of the little boy and Thurman. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/10/2018 6:42:00 PM
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it- and hope you have a nice evening, too! ;)
Date: 10/12/2018 7:38:00 PM
You know how to do a great character study. I enjoyed this glimpse of a wise old man and the young'un so annoying!!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/12/2018 8:32:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I've just started doing these "character studies" and am really having a blast with it! ;)
Date: 10/12/2018 3:53:00 PM
So much to love about this - 'the grandiose greenhorn' and 'he remains uncommonly calm', the last two lines simple perfection - also making this a Fav!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/12/2018 8:31:00 PM
Thank you- I am flattered you enjoyed it so much! ;)
Date: 10/11/2018 5:50:00 AM
A Fav for me! This is such a wonderful sketch of humanness; a deep think, and profoundly on target! I can see Thurman, but cannot fathom the thoughts that are going through his head. It is true, the more a person goes through sometimes, the more empathy and kindness they extend toward others. I see a lot of people who are way too intelligent to get flustered over the "little things." Well done my friend. This is terrific! I love it!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/11/2018 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much! ;) I am glad that I was able to convey that in this piece... this was partially based on my grandfather- who considered everything pretty minor after all he'd been through in his early years. He had a sense of gratitude for life itself that just overflowed and encompassed his whole outlook and demeanor...

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