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Knots

There are places within the shadows, That rain cannot touch, Where sound, save but for the faintest of mumbles, Knows not either but the fractured Affliction of itself turned inwards. These are the knots that wrap their rage Around distant memory, A place where there, But in God, Heavy thunder dwells.

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Date: 11/2/2023 10:42:00 AM
Your words are deep and deserve to be read twice dear poet, :)
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Michelle Smith
Date: 11/3/2023 11:44:00 PM
yeah and i gotta reread just to wrap my mind around it to understand, what does he mean...?
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/3/2023 1:48:00 PM
greatly appreciated
Date: 10/22/2023 12:16:00 PM
I love "...knots that wrap their rage..." Profound write Mat. :)
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 10/23/2023 1:04:00 PM
thank you for the comment -
Date: 10/9/2023 8:31:00 PM
So much depth... I can relate to your work.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 10/10/2023 7:44:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words, Paige.