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Kittens

needles and wool twine frolic and playtime creatures we adore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/12/2012 9:05:00 AM
perfect picture!i love kittens and this poem makes me smile..>>charmane
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Date: 6/10/2011 3:45:00 PM
this was very well written.. cory
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Date: 6/7/2011 9:07:00 PM
Susan, you can call this one a senryu! It's adorable. If you prefer traditional senryu, you only would need to add two syllables to the middle line,but as it stands it can be also a modern senryu!
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Date: 6/7/2011 5:36:00 PM
yes we do, hopefully I will find one soon! Thanks so much for the kind words and stopping by I'm always available for help just soup mail me. Light & Love
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Susan Mills
Date: 6/10/2011 3:35:00 PM
love to soup mail you! Can someone let me know how to send soup mail. Susan
Date: 6/7/2011 3:40:00 PM
Creative and lovely expressions on kittens, nicde images, Susan
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Date: 6/7/2011 2:11:00 PM
I "adore "kittens also, Susan, nothing more lovable, thanks for the visit to my poetry~~
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Date: 6/7/2011 2:00:00 PM
oh Susan this is cute and clever and my cats enjoy the twine too.. a super piece and so happy to see u as I was thinking of u just yesterday luv..
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