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Kissed the Sky

Two peas in a pod that would be my wife and I We have grabbed a dream and kissed the sky Two full-blown addict’s on a dead run We lived our lives just to stay spun Outlaws, lovers and partners in crime Lost forever in the hands of time Living just to somehow survive Walking zombie’s barley alive Found in each other the will to fight Out of darkness and into the light I love her more than words could ever say We have helped each other live the right way Forever bound to each other’s love Giving Praise to the Lord above Two peas in a pod that would be my wife and I We have grabbed a dream and kissed the sky

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Giselle Sun

Date: 9/26/2009 7:48:00 AM

This is beautifully written. As usual, an excellent write. Thank you again for your kind words on my side of the hill.

Andrew Crisci

Date: 9/10/2009 1:10:00 AM

Hi, Michael! Congratulations on your winning poem in Nathan's contest, " Two peas in a pod ". It is well-deserving and well-written. You are telling a story of two lost souls that found God's love and forgiveness. Leaving your past behind, and starting a new beginning by putting your trust in God to look forward to a brighter tomorrow. We all fall short of the glory of God, but repentance brings us back to Him! God bless you and your loved ones. Warmest Regards, Andrew.

Andrew Crisci

Date: 9/10/2009 1:07:00 AM

Hi, Michael! Congratulation on your winning poem in Nathan's contest, " Two peas in a pod ". It is well-desrving and well-written. You are telling a story of two lost souls that found God's love and forgiveness. Leaving your past behind, and start a new beginning by putting your trust in God and look forward to a brighter tomorrow. We all fall short of the glory of God,but repentance brings us back to Him! God bless you and your loved ones. Warmest Regards, Andrew.

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/9/2009 11:58:00 PM

Michael, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/9/2009 2:03:00 PM

This is a beautiful write that still manages to stick a testimony right in the middle. I love this! Congratulations on your win!

Sue Mason

Date: 9/9/2009 9:01:00 AM

Awesome write here, Michael. Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2009 3:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest Michael. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 9/9/2009 12:02:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Nathan's contest Michael.Rgds Brian

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/8/2009 6:18:00 PM

Congratulations on placing in Nathan’s” Two Peas in a Pod” poetry contest with this wonderful and heart-warming poem. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/8/2009 5:35:00 PM

Such an expression of your love!! Congratulations, Michael, in placing in the contest!! ~ Love, Carrie

Nathan Leccese

Date: 9/8/2009 5:14:00 PM

Congratulations on a Honorable Mention in my contest! Nate.

James Fraser

Date: 8/30/2009 9:39:00 AM

Super duper write Michael, indeed two pea's in a pod. Your family are in my thoughts always>>James

Farah Chamma

Date: 8/28/2009 3:27:00 AM

A beautiful poem...May Allah bless you both... thank you for sharing, Farah

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/21/2009 4:05:00 PM

great poetry again... gonna read it again! enjoy your weekend:)

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/21/2009 4:04:00 PM

beautiful poetry.... loved the two peas in a pod thing there.. enjoy your day.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/21/2009 3:57:00 PM

I love these two peas in a pod Michael. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love YF4L, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/21/2009 2:24:00 PM

you really are two peas in a pod-you re like peas and carrots:)and no one can be more like wo peas in a pod than you two--through thick and thin--bravo--charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/21/2009 1:22:00 PM

I really like stanzas 6 and 8. Keep writing. Sara

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 8/21/2009 12:27:00 PM

Michael, you amaze me, you carry a spiritual and loving message in every poem you write. Your dediction to your love is honorable and you do her proud by the honor you bestow on her through your loving words, you have truely been blessed, my friend, I LOVE reading your poetry! The books I have are becoming worn and frayed but the words live in my and my husbands hearts. Thank you for your kind comments also, Bless you always, mj.... TRU

P Sheart

Date: 8/21/2009 11:49:00 AM

Hi Michael Amazing talent you are. Such a incredible story of two hitting rock bottom and pulling yourselves up by your boot straps together in the strength of your love to overcome such a powerful addiction. What a incredible inspiration you are to all your readers. A living example that with the power of love anything is possible. Keep writing and we'll keep reading! Many blessings to you and yours my friend. Love Light Truth Patricia

Deborah Herber

Date: 8/21/2009 11:45:00 AM

Beautiful! The way you fill your words with so much emotion is totally amazing--but beyond that, how you changed your lives is incredibly inspiring and heartfelt! I love your work, Mr. Jordan--you have a gift from a blessed source!