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Kiss the Rain

KISS THE RAIN (anguish of a flood survivor) Distinguish,I can't,between raindrops and tears, For my face now is a tragedy,carved out by demons . Do the rains try to soothe, or amplify my fears, and mock my existence,full of sarcastic puns? They swayed away,to rhythms of nature, with rains oiling the wet inferno. The flood engulfing all beseechers, wrestling for life,but ending with K.O. It's me who survives, to tell you the tale, pale be my face,caressed by the rain. The armada of dear ones,lifeless they sail, soaking the rain, the seed of this bane. Insane now I grow,when I think of days, when my skin was tickled,by tears of clouds. But providence failed,as they cried on my face, and washed away my kin,with me covered in shroud. Thou kiss the rain,and hail the elation, your pardon I implore,for it's you I envy. No peace in my life, a rainy fiction, with silence before tempest,then silence eternally.

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Date: 6/25/2013 6:20:00 PM
You are very talented, I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Adarsh Raj
Date: 6/25/2013 11:00:00 PM
Thank you sir...
Date: 6/25/2013 4:27:00 PM
this is a very poetic write. Welcome to Soup.
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Date: 6/25/2013 11:01:00 PM
Thanks a lot ma'am
Date: 6/22/2013 10:12:00 PM
Excellent. Meaningful and powerful phrasing. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 6/25/2013 11:03:00 PM
Thank you sir...
Date: 6/22/2013 5:06:00 PM
This is awesome Adarsh ;} fav's some poets make me so jealous ;},,,, glad you liked my MASSACRE ;} have a great day .
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Adarsh Raj
Date: 6/25/2013 11:04:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by and reading my works..Have a good day.
Date: 6/22/2013 11:41:00 AM
An excellent piece, full of graphic imagery and powerful phrasing. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 6/25/2013 11:10:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poetry, sir....
Date: 6/22/2013 10:31:00 AM
wow! with silence eternally. Adarsh, a deep poem, my favorite line... my face now is a tragedy,carved out by demons ........... i am feeling the pun we are... enjoyed your poem... LInda
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Date: 6/25/2013 11:12:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poetry, Ma'am
Date: 6/22/2013 9:58:00 AM
I can feel the flow of emotion in this work..Sorry to hear of your loss..That had to be a traumatic event..It is good that you could write about it..Thanks for stopping by.Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 6/25/2013 11:13:00 PM
You feel my poem, tht's the biggest reward I could get... Thank you ma'am