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Keepsakes

His jazz collection fills the spare bedroom Music man, you see, was his nom de plume Our wedding album rests on the nightstand A keepsake for my viewing on demand The tarnished silver comb that stroked his hair Lays on the dresser beside his easy chair The carnation he wore on our wedding day A keepsake preserved in a glass display The love notes he sent are bound in a box I read them again when life deals hard knocks His old Volvo still sits in the driveway In it he proposed to his fiancé I’ve clung to these treasures, lived in the past Keepsakes from four years that went by too fast Comfort they bring as he watches from above John, my husband, the only man I’ve loved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/30/2010 1:58:00 PM
Somehow I missed this one - so tender and loving. The poem is simplicity itself, yet is so, so sincere that I want to shed a tear. Love, Dave
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Date: 10/29/2010 4:17:00 AM
excellent all round my friend
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Date: 10/20/2010 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Yah for "K"!". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2010 7:28:00 AM
Many congratulations Carolyn on this lovely piece on your memories of John. It's a pleasure to read it, and thank you for sharing >> James :)x
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Date: 10/20/2010 4:19:00 AM
A favorite of mine.. Congratulations to you, my friend, been hectic whole week, thanks for listening also.. Love Wilma
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Date: 10/19/2010 9:50:00 PM
A beautiful touching poem Carolyn. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:26:00 PM
Again I say this is wonderful, Carolyn. Congrats for the top ten. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/19/2010 3:40:00 PM
You and Constance were thinking alike for this contest. Very nice. Congratulations Caroline. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/19/2010 1:08:00 PM
So beautiful and touching Caroline! Congratulations!Take care~Deb
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Date: 10/19/2010 11:10:00 AM
congrats on your win with this stunningly beautiful tribute
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Date: 10/19/2010 10:42:00 AM
Oh Sweet LNC..not fair..not fair that you lost John. Congrats on keeping his alive in your poem..and for your win. BG
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Date: 10/19/2010 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn, on your beautiful "Keepsakes" worthy of a place in the top 10. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:23:00 AM
This was another very moving entry that I received for the contest, Carolyn-- congrats with this very beautiful poem-- and how wonderful nonetheless that you have keepsakes to remember him by--they are treasures indeed-- hugs nikko :)
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Date: 10/19/2010 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on the well dserved win in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:34:00 AM
SAd poem, Carolyn, and it is a window into your treasured memories. I hope you will find a new love on earth! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/30/2010 2:07:00 PM
A Gem from your heart Carolyn. You deserve happiness girl >> James
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Date: 9/28/2010 8:41:00 PM
this was a beautful piece. i loved the rhyming; but more important i think it helpd you in some way. i spent part of today talking to a picture. and singing to it too. it helps. john
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:40:00 PM
keepsakes are the apart of the heart where the things we cherish most can be buried within, beautiful write from your heart, Caroyln. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 9/28/2010 8:37:00 AM
Beautiful tribute. Tears in the office is not a good thing. Thanks for sharing, Joe
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Date: 9/28/2010 7:09:00 AM
A beautiful, touching tribute to John of the love and the memories that you treasure Carolyn, love Wilma
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Date: 9/27/2010 2:34:00 PM
Smile ~ I remember "Your Beauties Love, 'Beautiful, Carolyn Devonshire!!!'" ~ I do not have a lot of time at the moment dear but I wished to stop by to say "Hello" unto "Your Treasures" before I return soon this eve &, until then, I hope that "Your Beauty" is doing wonderfully dear ~ "My Love to 'You Always,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Evening, 'Beautiful Carolyn Devonshire;'" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 9/27/2010 1:57:00 PM
This is so bitter-sweet and touching! Memories are precious reminders of happy times. Lovely! Hugs, Kris
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Date: 9/27/2010 1:47:00 PM
What a profound memories of the sweet past you have penned, Carolyn.
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Date: 9/27/2010 1:42:00 PM
Fine tribute to your loved one. I recently published a poem about my father who passed a few months ago. Poetry is not only enjoyable but(as my late father said) it teaches one how to feel. Peace and love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/27/2010 1:00:00 PM
Being surrounded by these memories may be comforting sometimes, but they might also make it hard to get on with your life. Very sad poem, but it does convey the great love you had for John. Sorry for your loss. Diane
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