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Kaleidoscope

I watch my shadows as I walk this earthly path. Ever changing as the moon follows the sun. And though I travel far and wide. I see hands extended in friendship. My shadow falls on whispers passing by. As I walk this Kaleidoscope of highways. I see you shed a tear, and I wipe it clear. So the sun can shine for you again. I see that my world remains beautiful to me. Even when there are dark clouds around me. No, I shall not sink to the lowest form. Moonlight carries me forever forward. Even with my shadow, part light, part dark. I'm but a shadow within this earthly realm. 5/ 27/ 2013 9:30pm Mon.

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Faaiqah Abader

Date: 3/13/2018 11:14:00 AM

Hi Debbie:) I've read a few of your poems since your visit to my page.. you write so beautifully! I really enjoy the imagery that Kaleidoscope takes me through as a reader:) Well written! -F :)

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/22/2017 8:50:00 AM

Wow! An inspiring read Debbie. Loved this poem. Speaks volumes and uplifting as well. A great way to start my day. Ty! Even when there are dark clouds around me....moving. i can relate...

Ken Carroll

Date: 8/29/2013 10:54:00 PM

Hi Debbie, Thanks for sharing this one with me..I enjoyed reading it. Regards, Ken

Michael Ainsley

Date: 6/20/2013 9:08:00 PM

Thoughts become things yes? Beleave in a beautiful world and that is what you will find. Beautiful people in a beautiful world even as someone standing right beside you sees something else . It is all mental work to become we are looking for. Likes attract.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/20/2013 10:11:00 PM

like attracts like,,, it sure does Michael ;}

Judy Konos

Date: 6/17/2013 11:08:00 AM

Lovely.....thanks

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/17/2013 6:11:00 PM

Thank you Judy ;}

Allan Koven

Date: 6/17/2013 10:06:00 AM

Deep thoughts, eloquently spoken. Can we all be to one another, brothers and sisters from the same realm?

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/17/2013 4:16:00 PM

Thank you Allen ;}

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/11/2013 11:04:00 AM

Great imagery. I enjoyed the mix of kaleidoscopes and shadows. Your last couplet sorta reminded me of a quote I heard awhile back... “We are all visitors to this time, this place. We are just passing through. Our purpose here is to observe, to learn, to grow, to love... and then we return home." - Aboriginal Proverb.