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Just Me

She slipped in then slipped out   spinning my revolving   heart   a weekly affair doesn't seem fair life turned about feelings flew free but still here I am just me

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Date: 4/17/2018 5:00:00 PM
We all yearn for something more, if only others would too.
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Date: 4/14/2018 8:27:00 AM
Poems that make you go hmmmm. <3
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Date: 4/13/2018 11:13:00 PM
I love the twisting of emotion, your poem bigger than its words :) xomo!
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Date: 4/13/2018 4:11:00 PM
Well written poem, Tim. A lovely read. Well done.
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Date: 4/13/2018 3:25:00 PM
- Sounds so sad, Tim - I wish you a wonderful and peaceful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/13/2018 3:13:00 PM
A very beautiful but sad tale of fleeting love and loss and ending in loneliness butnever give up the dream of finding the right person Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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