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Just Hangin' Around

Here I hang permanently latched to this coat peg while fumbling though my mind what I did wrong. Oh please release me I constantly meow and beg but to no avail no one heeds my lonely cat song, so I may be hanging freely my lifelong. As I now recall, I went on a mouse strike I refused to eat the gray furry critter. Packed my vittles and headed off on my bike until I was retrieved by my little sitter, so now I hang here like a piece of litter. For punishment she dressed me in overhauls and shirt and hung me on this hook for my timeout. I loathe being clothed, I am glad it is not a skirt it would be quite airy no doubt, so I will hang here and quietly pout. Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey Aug. 3, 2011 Fourth Place Winner ~ "Hangin' in there" Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Francine Roberts Aug. 29, 2011

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Date: 11/18/2011 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2011 10:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest Caryl
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Date: 8/10/2011 11:03:00 AM
Congrats Caryl on a super big win in the contest with this delightful entry my friend.. kudos on the win luv..
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Date: 8/10/2011 10:17:00 AM
Many congrats, Caryl : )
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Date: 8/10/2011 8:05:00 AM
Congrats on your creative win..Sara
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Date: 8/10/2011 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine's "Hangin In There" contest Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2011 5:35:00 AM
cuteness, caryl!! laurels for you on the fine, fine win! :) huggs!
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Date: 8/10/2011 12:57:00 AM
Guess he learned his lesson and will be "mousing" again, Caryl. Cute take on the contest and congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/10/2011 12:15:00 AM
congrats on your 4th place win in the contest Caryl , loved the last line
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Date: 8/3/2011 11:50:00 AM
funny and cute one!! enjoyed!
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Date: 8/3/2011 11:01:00 AM
Nice take on the theme of the contest, Caryl
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