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P arking my Harley near the doorway, we sauntered inside. O ther than a lone microphone, I took the emptiness in stride. E VENTUALLY the emcee asked what would be our order, T hough it was hard for him to speak because of his goiter. R eaching for my empty wallet was an INEVITABLE ILLUSION, Y our CREATIVITY will be needed now, to prevent any contusion. P erhaps I was mistaken, thinking I’d drop in for an alcohol INFUSION. A lthough, the strong smell of pot just might ease that delusion. L ooking all around the place for some small sense of sanity, A fter that, the TV just went blank during a show called “Hannity.” C ould this place, I wondered; be a “poetry palace” with an open mike? E xcited, I ran out for the chap book I left on my trike. By John Trusty

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Date: 5/29/2011 2:49:00 PM
Talk about a winner....Indeed...this is a wow wow ....as Oprah says...thanks
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:57:00 AM
Congrats John on your fabulous win in the 'poetry palace' contest... gautami
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Date: 5/21/2011 2:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your 3rd place win :o)
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Date: 5/20/2011 12:57:00 PM
Thanks to Linda Marie for the placement in her contest and to all who have commented on the my effort. All the best. JT
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Date: 5/19/2011 6:54:00 PM
Congrats John on your 3rd place win in the contest.Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 5/19/2011 4:08:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 5/19/2011 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest J T. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:37:00 AM
Enjoyed the humor, John. You thought you were stopping by a pub. LOL Congratulations on your win in the Poetry Palace contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2011 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of linda, John
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Date: 5/19/2011 4:04:00 AM
A Harley at your palace? Some place u got here. Congrats on your win. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/19/2011 2:57:00 AM
good you dropped in, john... whistling a big cheer for your win! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/18/2011 9:08:00 PM
Congrats John on your third place win in my contest with this creative write ..thankxx for your support luv..
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Date: 5/16/2011 1:05:00 PM
Hi, John, after a very long time I read your and that too with this poetic piece of poetry palace, Good luck in the contest
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