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Jump Start My Heart

Jump Start My Heart
The pulse is barely detectable growing weaker every second Oxygen, breath of life so thin the moment he went through the glass Emergency, emergency, code red means critical care needed Emergency, emergency more time the monitors have pleaded Through double hissed air lock doors the gurney comes to rest Only if time gave a little bit more to save these eyes from death Emergency, emergency critical DOA arrival for the morgue to receive Emergency, emergency donor card active what organs can we retrieve Systematic checks and tests to match up with lists of lives who bleed Cross referenced and graphed a positive match for a heart in need Emergency, emergency redirect the gurney into operation room 9 Emergency, emergency start to finish we only have a few hours time The DOA lays bared, incisions everywhere, the largest in mid chest The helicopter awaits, a panic state, flying a cooler way out west Emergency, emergency clinging to life left with little chance Emergency, emergency the EKG is flat as death gets a transplant Life anew stitched in, arteries in stints, preparing to revive a heart All plugged in, wired skin, electrical pulses give life a jump start Emergency, emergency failed revival on the first three tries Emergency, emergency on the fourth life beats to opening eyes
Written for contest: "Wake Up My Heart" 11/04/17
WON 1ST PLACE IN CONTEST RESULTS

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Date: 12/5/2017 7:34:00 PM
A deep and stirring poem Brian, full of intense imagery. A thrilling and suspenseful write. Congratulations on your fine placement. ~Susan
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Date: 12/4/2017 6:53:00 PM
Congratulations, Brian, excellent imagery . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Brian Davey
Date: 12/5/2017 1:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve
Date: 12/4/2017 6:37:00 AM
deep and poignant, great poem from a great original contest, thank you and congrats :)
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Brian Davey
Date: 12/5/2017 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Laura it's always a pleasure
Date: 10/23/2017 11:41:00 AM
Wow, Brian, that was a brilliant piece, congratulations on your top win:)
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/23/2017 4:52:00 PM
Thank you so mUch Jo I am glad everyone seemed to like my take on the theme
Date: 10/22/2017 6:48:00 PM
Wow, Brian, what an amazing poem that met the theme challenge over and above! You presented a miracle! Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win in the contest. Sandra
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/22/2017 7:33:00 PM
Well that comment sure made me smile! I am always happy to receive positive words from you Sandra! Thank you
Date: 10/22/2017 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Brian, great piece enjoyed. :))
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/22/2017 7:32:00 PM
Thank you sonce much
Date: 10/22/2017 2:24:00 PM
An action packed read Brian, congrats :)
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/22/2017 2:56:00 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Date: 10/22/2017 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on this unique approach.
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/22/2017 2:08:00 PM
Thank you and I am just glad that it worked out
Date: 10/22/2017 7:11:00 AM
Congrats Brian, for your placement with this brilliantly-penned piece! ;-)
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/22/2017 2:07:00 PM
Thanks Teddy I appreciate it
Date: 10/21/2017 8:04:00 PM
Wow! Action-packed! Congratulations, Brian!
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/22/2017 3:45:00 AM
Thank you Kim I appreciate your comments
Date: 10/18/2017 6:41:00 AM
you really know how to write a deep poem.. Well written my friend..
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/18/2017 3:27:00 PM
Thank you I was hoping that this write is completely different than what anyone else who entered the contest might have written

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