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Judgement

Laughing at my lines Well the joke is on you Questioning my words Have you nothing better to do I may not know a chastushka Though I can put pen to paper My stanzas and my verse need work I'm sure your intellect's much greater But poetry is an art form Unique, it's my creation I may not be your cup of tea I don't seek your validation Dismissing my thoughts as ramblings Is really quite absurd I bare the scars, etched are the lines Of each and every word I did not write for judgement I wrote to release my mind If you dislike what you read Please move on, don't be unkind 7th November. Judged by a panel of your peers

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Date: 11/16/2020 7:26:00 AM
This is so well written. Congratulations on your win.
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Alunamda Yokwe
Date: 11/16/2020 10:37:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words
Date: 11/14/2020 4:17:00 PM
well said Alunama, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Alunamda Yokwe
Date: 11/15/2020 5:06:00 AM
Thank you!

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