Jubilee

I soared upon a seagull’s wings to hear a sailor’s song euphoric in my jubilee while dolphins sang along. Written on 3/5/2017

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Ricky Muse

Date: 1/22/2022 10:28:00 AM

Amazing. So visual and rhythmic. Thanks for sharing............peace!

Laura Leiser
Date: 1/22/2022 6:47:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments, Richard! I appreciate it! :)

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 10/27/2021 1:10:00 PM

Wow.... Your imagery takes me upon a "seagull's wings"and I can hear the dolphins sing! Extraordinary!!! Blessings, Paulette

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/27/2021 5:20:00 PM

Thanks so much, Paulette! So glad you liked this one! :)

John Watt

Date: 10/14/2021 10:41:00 PM

Love the oceanic imagery you use, the exquisite meter and the musical theme. Perfect for a trophy win. Congratulations, dear friend, it was well earned.

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/15/2021 7:44:00 AM

Thanks so much, John! This couplet came from my poem, Soup Bubble Dreams that I wrote awhile back. So happy it could stand on its own!

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/12/2021 10:30:00 AM

Dear Laura, my heart’s imagination is soaring on euphoric wings through realms of revelry, beauty and song!! Your poem is exquisite, my dear friend. Congratulations on your excellent trophy win in Milton’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/12/2021 3:06:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, Laura. You’re a stellar poet amongst the stars, my dear friend, and your poem is a huge fav!

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/12/2021 10:42:00 AM

Thank you for being so complimentary, Susan! Your thoughtful words mean so much to me, coming from a great poet like you! :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/7/2021 9:42:00 AM

It's a very beautiful and highly poetic couplet.

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/7/2021 8:18:00 PM

Thank you, Christuraj! :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/6/2021 1:20:00 PM

Lyrical fantasia Laura, congrats!

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/6/2021 8:23:00 PM

Thank you, James! :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/6/2021 10:47:00 AM

What a delightful duet, Laura! Congratulations on your trophy win! Blessings.

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/6/2021 8:23:00 PM

Thanks so much, Sam! :)

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/6/2021 9:58:00 AM

This is really joyful, I love this! Congratulations!

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/6/2021 8:23:00 PM

Thank you, BJ! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/6/2021 7:01:00 AM

Awesome! Congratulations!

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/6/2021 8:23:00 PM

Thank you, Kim! So happy you liked this! :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/1/2021 1:24:00 PM

This is excellent, Laura! You paint such a beautiful picture in just two lines! ~ Congratulations on claiming a very deserved trophy. ~ Regards // paul

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/1/2021 5:41:00 PM

Thank you so much much, Paul! I’m very happy that you liked this! God bless! :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/30/2021 4:04:00 PM

Beautiful. I love it!!! God bless you my friend. Love, Gina

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/30/2021 7:32:00 PM

Thank you, Gina! I’m so happy you liked this one! God bless you! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/30/2021 11:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Jubilee" is a wonderful write. I love it and your seagull’s/dolphins. Have a blessed day.................

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/30/2021 1:39:00 PM

Thanks so much, Paula. So happy you liked this one! :)

Francis J Grasso

Date: 9/30/2021 9:27:00 AM

Beautifully expressed, Laura! I love this style of poetry! Congratulations on this win! ...Fran

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/30/2021 1:40:00 PM

Thanks so much, Francis! I’m happy I liked this one! :)

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 9/29/2021 7:43:00 PM

This is gorgeous, Laura. Congratulations on a fine win! Carol Louise

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/30/2021 1:39:00 PM

Thank you, Carol! :)

Avery Won

Date: 9/29/2021 4:52:00 AM

Beautifully said <3

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/29/2021 7:54:00 AM

Thank you, Avery! :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/28/2021 11:50:00 PM

Brilliant couplet, Laura, congratulations:)

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/29/2021 7:54:00 AM

Thank you, Jo. Thrilled that you enjoyed this one! :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/28/2021 8:45:00 PM

I love seagulls and dolphins, and the flow of the rhymes is delightful, congratulations on your first place win!

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/29/2021 7:53:00 AM

Thank you, Michelle! Do happy you liked it! :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/28/2021 7:36:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/28/2021 8:04:00 PM

Thank you, Beata! So happy you liked this little couplet! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2021 5:06:00 PM

awesome!!! Congrats

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/28/2021 8:04:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! I’m happy you liked this one! :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/28/2021 12:48:00 PM

Wow, this is such a sublime piece! It's so deserving of the top spot win, Laura:-) Heartiest congratulations!

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/28/2021 12:56:00 PM

Thanks so much, Edward. So happy you liked this! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/28/2021 9:35:00 AM

absolutely delightful imagery Laura, many congratulations on your trophy win:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/28/2021 12:03:00 PM

Thank you, Jan! I’m so happy you liked this! :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/28/2021 9:35:00 AM

Laura, I was quite taken by your poem when I first read it. A lover of the sea and all things maritime, it was particularly delightful. And, of course, who doesn't love dolphins! It was perfect in every way, and I am happily awarding you the trophy for this wonderful couplet.

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/28/2021 12:02:00 PM

Thank you so very much for placing my poem first in your contest, Milton! I am “jubilant” over this win! :) I also love the sea, and we have a sailboat and enjoy being on the ocean..a very inspiring place to be! Thanks again, this made my day!!

Ann Peck

Date: 9/28/2021 8:56:00 AM

Your poem is euphoric and beautifully penned! Congratulations on your first place win!

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/28/2021 12:00:00 PM

Thank you, Ann! I am so excited it did so well! :)