Joy

Wind Rocks, mud Bugs in grill Driver whoops, hollers Jeep's happiness is off-roading

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Neva Romaine

Date: 3/25/2015 8:44:00 AM

Hey Sean, a warm welcome to Poetry Soup. This is a very expressive poem filled with great imagery and in so few words. Well done!! Be Blessed, Neva

Daver Austin

Date: 3/24/2015 9:08:00 AM

Great! Short and to the point. Very effective. Congrats on the selection. daver

Skat A

Date: 3/18/2015 10:54:00 PM

Nice form, Sean, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Sean Rackley

Date: 3/18/2015 2:31:00 PM

I opted to count the title as my first line and first syllable in the Fib sequence.