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Jealousy

Your skin is dark green, lying coiled, like a Mamba ready to strike sinking its venomous fangs deep. You are the primary color of human emotion. Ready to burst forth in anger and hate. The depths of the soul hide you like a fire pit concealing smouldering embers, ready to erupt in raging flames consuming friend and foe. It does not care. Destruction is its goal. Poison spreading through the life of families, dissolving bonds once held close. Jealousy, you are hatred, pride, malice, greed. Green is a warm color. But not on you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/18/2018 10:07:00 PM
Excellent and very descriptive poem about Jealosy. Very well written and congrats on your win!
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 12/19/2018 1:40:00 AM
Thank you Laura. I appreciate your comments
Date: 6/9/2018 10:45:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Oliver.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/10/2018 1:27:00 AM
Thank you Line. Oliver
Date: 6/9/2018 5:37:00 PM
Very powerful, Oliver, and written extremely well - loved it! Congrats on your well-deserved win, my friend! Blessings! :-)
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/9/2018 6:41:00 PM
Thank you Greg. Glad you liked this poem. Oliver
Date: 6/8/2018 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Oliver ! :)
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/8/2018 10:25:00 AM
Thank you Heidi
Date: 5/8/2018 8:47:00 PM
Lovely write
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Kishan Sharma
Date: 5/9/2018 12:33:00 AM
You can do even better
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/8/2018 10:08:00 PM
Thank you Kishan. Glad you liked it. Oliver
Date: 4/22/2018 12:14:00 PM
Wow awesome poem, Oliver.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 4/22/2018 3:47:00 PM
Thank you Line. Glad you liked this poem. It has been through several rewrites. Oliver

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