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'jealous of Me'

The tracks of my long forgotten tears Still remain, I wish they wouldn't be so evident Especially today When I wanted a fresh start Where the memories of you Were not so prominent I didn’t choose this path My feet led me here To the cenotaph of a love that was Trinkets and photos of a happier time Makes me jealous I envy that lady in the photo with you You look so content So in love It makes me jealous Of me And the way we use to be *Inspired by the song Jealous by Labrinth” ©111120151428

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/18/2016 9:27:00 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
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Date: 11/12/2015 10:12:00 AM
Oh, this touches a chord, Wilma...Love your unique lines " It makes me jealous Of me" made the feeling of regret more palpable. 7. hugs!
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Wilma Neels
Date: 11/13/2015 6:08:00 AM
Hey there Kim :) thanks hun and enjoy the weekend *hugs*
Date: 11/12/2015 9:57:00 AM
That second to last line, what a clincher. Great twist. Such a pleasure to read.
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Wilma Neels
Date: 11/13/2015 6:08:00 AM
Thank you Scott :) your comment made me smile today..
Date: 11/11/2015 7:52:00 PM
Is the song about someone jealous of the "old you" in a picture. What a clever idea it is!! Love it!
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Wilma Neels
Date: 11/12/2015 5:59:00 AM
Hi Andrea, no the song is about lost love or like someone else interpreted it to someone passing away and being happy on the other side... I just wrote mine in that context. *hope that makes sense* :) I actually posted a link to the song by Labrinth on my Facebook timeline
Date: 11/11/2015 3:06:00 PM
- Lovely song, Wilma - .... and lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Wilma Neels
Date: 11/12/2015 6:07:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise :) *hugs*
Date: 11/11/2015 1:26:00 PM
I've now listened to that song, and I can see the inspiration behind this poem. Wonderfully penned : )
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Wilma Neels
Date: 11/11/2015 1:28:00 PM
Hehe, thank you Mark. Was weird waking up to it this morning ;)
Date: 11/11/2015 10:29:00 AM
Your feelings come through strong and straight from the heart. You have captured the feelings of loneliness and depression and have displayed them for our contemplation. Emile. #7
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Wilma Neels
Date: 11/11/2015 1:30:00 PM
I see my reply jumped to S.O's comment :( gremlins
Date: 11/11/2015 6:56:00 AM
Losing love leaves deep ruts from tears, but they eventually fill in from smiling. Well written, Wilma.
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Wilma Neels
Date: 11/11/2015 7:08:00 AM
So true Lin, thank you for stopping by :)

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