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Jagged

JAGGED My drawn line Not so straight as planned So jagged And ugly It resembles sheet lightning Yet it pleases me A freedom To join sky with earth With a jolt Of bright light As its path cuts through the air A hint of ozone A symbol For comic heroes As a flash On the chest But there were and are, bad links So it’s straight lines now

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Date: 10/27/2023 8:05:00 AM
Howard, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my contest, well done, Constance
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Date: 10/24/2023 1:17:00 PM
You really have a way with words! I loved this! Flows so well! Congratulations on winning
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Date: 10/24/2023 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/21/2023 11:40:00 PM
This is interesting in its simplicity - I like the way you've riffed an idea so visually and yet created a poem that has elements to ponder - clever stuff
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