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'jacket of Indecision'

She felt a little stifled Like her whole life Was on repeat And she didn't embrace The parts that were being rewind She knew there had to be changes made That all the "so called" comfort She was accustomed to Had to go There was no amount Of pretending that would wipe That reality off the table She had to cut ties She had to wave goodbye Even though she had on her Jacket of indecision It needed to go too Or she would be left with Questions she had no answers too
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Date: 12/28/2016 7:18:00 AM
Keiths comments very apt. Btw Its rewound not rewind. That feeling of letting go of her comfort zone yet not quite ready to embrace change is excellently portrayed. I took a mental photograph of that scene. Stunning
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Date: 10/9/2016 3:23:00 PM
Really loved reading your.poems..It seems She is at crossroads...Hope you are fine dear Willma.It been a while.
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Wilma Neels
Date: 10/10/2016 4:13:00 AM
Hey Charmaine, it's been ages since I have been on here.. how you?

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