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It's Only Make Believe

IT'S ONLY MAKE BELIEVE I never would make believe that I am God He is the One and Only God there is But for the sake of let's pretend I'd save every soul on earth And bring them Home to Live with Me To show them the love I have for them And just how much they are worth 25 June 2020 For the contest It's Only Make Believe Sponsored by Regina Riddle

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Date: 8/29/2020 8:26:00 AM
Wow what a compassionate gold hearted poem , it expresses noble great altruistic thoughts so admirably. Kudos. Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 7/2/2020 9:46:00 PM
Hi Curtis, don't be discouraged. I have received a few N/As lately...just makes me try harder in the next one. I get a lot of N/As from Regina because she usually has only a few placements. Enjoy the 4th and your weekend, my friend! Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Date: 7/2/2020 9:48:00 AM
To Save us all Is What He Wants, that is how i feel....but that really wont happen simply because of Free Will....too many make the wrong choices....too few positively use their voices....Only Faith Can Successfully Bring us Through....and my Faith Is Solid, i wonder how many others' are True....i like this curtis....good job....
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 7/2/2020 10:32:00 AM
Thanks, Eric! I appreciate your support and I definitely like the way you responded. That is an unusual method of response, but greatly appreciated because it adds credence to my poem. God Bless you, Brother!
Date: 6/25/2020 8:36:00 PM
Hi, Curtis, I'm happy I found your beautiful poem tonight. It's telling of your kind soul. I hope you are well, my friend. Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 7/1/2020 1:56:00 AM
It looks as if Regina didn't like it very much. It got the old N/A treatment. That is not a remark of bitterness, just surprise. You, she, and Jan Allison would be the three people I would have picked out who would like it. As you may be able to notice, you are the only one to even respond. Thanks again for your support
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 6/25/2020 11:25:00 PM
Rhonda, words can ne'er express how good it makes me feel when I get a response from you on any poem I've submitted. You are always kind, considerate, and honest in your remarks. The honest part, some people say, can't be seen, but oh, it can. One need only see what you say and they will see the magnitude of your honesty.

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