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It's One of Those Fabulous Poems

IT’S ONE OF THOSE FABULOUS POEMS It’s one of those poems full of whimsical stuff when you’ve read a few lines you’ve had more than enough. it triggers a smile and it throws you off-track you don’t want to read it but keep coming back it has no direction no themes or no plots but it grabs your attention seizes your thoughts. it’s one of those poems you just can’t explain why you read it again and again. It’s one of those poems that just doesn't make sense it has not a present or even past tense with the subject confusing it doesn’t seem fair it sucks you right in then leaves you hanging there it may give you a headache it may make you groan but somehow you just can’t leave it alone. it’s one of those poems you’d like to hide on a shelf but you wish you had written your self. It’s one of those poems where the style is wrong too long for a lyric too short for a song It’s one of those poems difficult to review the meter is off the formats askew it’s one of those poems you never thought you would keep but it plays in your mind as you’re trying to sleep though it's not your genre somehow it hooks you you can’t wait till your friends read it too. IT'S ONE OF THOSE FABULOUS POEMS!

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Date: 3/14/2016 2:02:00 PM
Hi Liz, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/13/2016 10:38:00 AM
Liz, Congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "Names on Poetry Soup" if you like. It would be nice to hear from you and all those who I honored with a placement. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/6/2015 2:25:00 PM
Great whimsy of how something can get its hooks in U.S...fun! Word play was just as fun as the message here. Delighted you did it as a rhyme, fun mini plots!
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Date: 11/6/2015 1:36:00 PM
Cute and quirky! Smooth rhymes and flow. Love, Kim
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Date: 11/6/2015 11:13:00 AM
So right, we've all read one of those. Love this poem it's chirpy, fun and flows wonderfully.
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Liz Labadie-Reilly
Date: 11/6/2015 12:24:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful feedback.

Book: Shattered Sighs