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It Was Winter

It never rained ,they were my tears; the sunken secrets behind my dazzling deep eyes ! It was winter and we were lovers its winter again and my love is frozen my heart is hoarse and insane, A ruined love song rings through my ears. accursed emotions breaking into tears my lips are bleeding with your kisses a venomous love releases a sad winter's tale :( Red @ 2012 3.30 am singapore...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/8/2012 3:36:00 AM
sure is sad Red, but a wonderful read. are you in singapore? i love it there, been many times when living in Perth western australia. harry
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Date: 1/6/2012 11:18:00 PM
EXCELLENT AND CREATIVE LINES SO IMPRESSIVE RED FIERY.. THANKXX FOR SWEET COMMENTS ON MY POETRY.. LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE LINES FROM U LUV..
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Date: 1/6/2012 8:45:00 PM
very beautiful,,ms fiery,,its a tear,,heart and soul poem...
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Date: 1/4/2012 8:13:00 PM
oooww, pain just surging out from this beautiful written poetry Red... keeping you in my thoughts
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Date: 1/4/2012 3:40:00 PM
you know what they say about love "it sux"
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Date: 1/4/2012 1:50:00 PM
Lovely,sad and beautiful written Red.(frozen love.....sad)OXOX hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/4/2012 12:28:00 PM
I feel the emotion in this, very well written. I love your lines: my lips are bleeding with your kisses a venomous love releases a sad winter's tale :(
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