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It Was An Ordinary Kind of Day

It was an ordinary kind of day, You had left me to go to work And drop off Denny at school A factory klaxon was sounding In the distance; and I pictured the Morning shift dragging the night's Dreams inside Outside, the peach trees we had Just planted, bowed to each other, As though acknowledging their taste And then that picture on the mantelpiece Brought night in to the breezy light room, Tugging at my shirt collar like a debt But I turned away to the blue sky; and The bowing peach trees asked why?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/27/2018 11:36:00 AM
A piece that is redolent with memory and aching Peter, I wish you much success as you continue writing.'
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Date: 5/25/2016 4:48:00 AM
This is truly quite lovely, Peter...I think Connie has put into words everything that, at such a time as this, can be said. My very best regards...And my deepest sympathies. Your friend. John.
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Date: 4/17/2016 7:43:00 PM
Peter, you have conveyed with such purity and beauty the depth of loss and how we must look to hope to go on. This is truly a beautiful masterpiece! A fave for me! So sorry about your loss. #7 ; )
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Date: 4/16/2016 9:33:00 PM
Deep and sad, my friend. Well written and thought provoking words. A7
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