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It Is Not Only the Candle Wick That Burns

It is not only the candle wick that burns this windy autumn night. There was a tinge of scarlet as well - now shockingly visible! - behind the beige drapes of the dilapidated living room of a cobwebbed cottage (both internal and external). One last great burst of flame was extinguished, as the heavenly lantern was swallowed whole; and in its place, spewed out, one crater filled silver sickle of a harvest moon. Can you feel from temple to temple stagnant synapses reassemble? As bloated television screens for the final time dwindle into a s i n g u l a r i t y

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Date: 3/11/2016 1:00:00 PM
Hi Tim, I Loved this one. Your creativity shines through Tim and the words sing straight into the mind, creating so many different visions. I do remember how the old TV sets used to go out and it does sort of look like it. You did get the big light and it tapered down to nothing. I have enjoyed reading this one tonight Tim...Vlad.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/12/2016 2:56:00 AM
Hey Vlad. Thanks for checking out an earlier post ... this was the first poem I wrote after my long absence from the Soup. Happy you caught on to what I was attempting to create with the shape :)
Date: 2/8/2016 11:11:00 AM
Pls Timothy, can you add a base at the bottom of your shape, so I can slowly sip the contents of this lovely and creative write! I love it! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/8/2016 7:54:00 PM
What a sweet thing to say Paul! Glad you enjoyed and thanks for stopping by.
Date: 2/8/2016 8:14:00 AM
It's great to have you back writing. I hope you stick around for a bit.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/8/2016 7:54:00 PM
Me too, Richard. I've been missing out.
Date: 2/7/2016 8:20:00 PM
This shape is beautiful. I can see it as a tulip and/or with a small centered final line, it could be a wine glass, or even the the Holy Grail. I like your line, 'stagnant synapses re-assemble.' These shape poems will become all the rage again.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/8/2016 7:52:00 PM
Thanks Suzanne! It might very well be! Enjoyed your imagination on what the shape looks like... the funny thing is that I was trying to imitate the look old TVs get when you turn them off ... but it ended up looking more like a flower, which is fine too.
Date: 2/7/2016 6:13:00 PM
Wow, very creative, and very very beautiful imagery! :)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/8/2016 7:53:00 PM
Thanks Arthur!
Date: 2/7/2016 5:30:00 PM
and the tv theme goes on and on. haha. I am rushing so I can get to my on demand episodes of a show on Showtime! But hmmm, first I better write a few poems!!! I enjoyed this one and I hope more people see it soon.
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:37:00 PM
I really ought too change things up to get some variety up in here! Hahaha ... thanks for your comment, and have a lovely rest of your day :)

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