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It Happened On A Misty Morning
Wettened by the mornings dew Closely spaced where rows of roses grew Footprints stained the cobblestone Where my love and I had walked, alone
by Charles Messina
My feet 'pon the wet stones slipped Lover's gentle hand my arm gripped Feeling protected, loved and fulfilled Knowing this was the real deal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 11/1/2023 11:36:00 PM
A genuine article. I like the atmosphere it conveys.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/2/2023 6:37:00 AM
Thank you, Jude. Sara K
Date: 10/2/2023 5:04:00 PM
That’s lovely Sara, all the best… Belle
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/3/2023 3:28:00 AM
I am glad you like it, Belle. I appreciate your kind review. Sara
Date: 9/28/2023 7:15:00 AM
Sara, An absolutely captivating piece of writing! Wishing you the utmost success in the contest. You perfectly replied to the prompt stanza
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/3/2023 3:27:00 AM
Why, thank you, Lasaad. Well, I guess we will see who gets to go with Charles' prompt soon. Sara
Date: 9/28/2023 4:52:00 AM
Excellent reply, you packed a lot in those four lines.. I could see the romance and being lost in a lover..
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/28/2023 6:58:00 AM
Wonderful comments from you, SO. Thanks for stopping by .. Sara
Date: 9/27/2023 2:36:00 PM
Beautifully romantic. Love it! Classic poetry.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2023 2:56:00 PM
Oh!! Why, thank you, Joe. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 9/27/2023 2:29:00 PM
another soft but meaningful poem and a great follow up to the previous poem. Nice job. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2023 2:54:00 PM
Why, thank you, Sara for the kind review of my work. I appreciate the visit to read my lines. Sara K
Date: 9/27/2023 9:18:00 AM
A lovely gentle write Sara.!…Debx
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2023 9:24:00 AM
Why, thank you, Deb. Sara
Date: 9/27/2023 7:47:00 AM
Sara, your co-write is an exquisite masterpiece that effortlessly aligns with the given prompt. It is a tapestry of words so enchanting, it feels like a soft caress against the reader's soul. I send you my heartfelt wishes for a win.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2023 9:03:00 AM
Your comments add a special touch, Lasaad. Thank you for the time spent here. Sara
Date: 9/27/2023 7:34:00 AM
- Lovely co-write, Sara :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2023 9:02:00 AM
Why, thank you, Anne-Lise. I appreciate the nice review of my work and best wishes and smiles. Sara

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