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It counts it all counts the perfect chosen word   what is spoken and what is heard      interactions and reactions   the smiles of your eyes   the feelings felt inside   oh how they make me melt       I swam naked in your soul   drying off under a heated sun   creating moments understood   just like you knew I would       strolling off in the night's review   not leaving you behind   two lover's lost inside with dreams steadfast entwined       drifting with the glow of the moon   searching stars and all of you   caresses revealing all   true beauty, I'm left in awe

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Date: 6/9/2018 11:03:00 PM
An awe inspiring write obviously dedicated to an awe inspiring lady. Really lovely, Tim.
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Date: 6/9/2018 3:03:00 PM
Lovely Tim...
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Date: 6/9/2018 9:30:00 AM
You u are a lucky guy! You do romance with finess. Thanks for your visit Tim. Have a great weekend.
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Date: 6/9/2018 5:05:00 AM
Romantic to the core...All the best Tim
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Date: 6/9/2018 12:38:00 AM
Will talk more after I finish dancing!!! LOL
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Date: 6/9/2018 12:37:00 AM
Tim this is an a perfection, in fact I loved the line "I swam naked in your soul" I may wish to rent it! :)
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Date: 6/8/2018 9:26:00 PM
Perfect poem, Tim! such smooth cadence, expertly crafted, I swam gracefully thru your thoughts...jim
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Date: 6/8/2018 2:49:00 PM
- This "talking" romance, Tom - Beautiful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2018 12:45:00 PM
This is what beauty is made of...these lines...these sentiments...Lovely
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Date: 6/8/2018 10:23:00 AM
Awe. Aw, swoon. I'm speaking english I swear! xomo ;)
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Date: 6/8/2018 9:52:00 AM
And I am left in awe of your poem. Beautiful Tim! :)
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