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Island

On this island a cold wind is blowing as trees wave closer together in the distant night fall. The sun declines slowly as darkness surrounds you and murmurs that you are alone. Every move you make only floods the memories that confine your steps. There is no open corridor to the past only a sinking ship, an island weeping for the future. Night falls only the sound of waves crushing and a sea breeze of cold night air.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/26/2014 11:45:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words... I just feel this way at certain points in time...
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Date: 2/25/2014 11:45:00 PM
Reads as if you are in the Aleutian Islands off Alaska. Good write.
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Date: 2/25/2014 9:18:00 PM
I can feel the lonely chill Julie...really good piece..luv,Deb
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Date: 2/25/2014 8:22:00 PM
Beautiful Julie... Enjoyed... Verlena
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