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is love not like the weathered bark

Is love not like the weathered bark Tightly holding that which it cherishes A gnarled and wily smile savoring The beauty of its outstretched arms Rocking to the tempo of the time Swaying in a sunset serenade Bowing to the moon’s mellowness Cracking its knuckles in the cooling glow Oh, love, you traipsing vagabond Trailing your pheromonal tease Amidst the cloudless shadows Stirring the sediment of sensuality Arousing a tingle of latent lust Sitting on the edge of sunrise Listening to the songs of spring

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Date: 3/28/2024 5:32:00 PM
'Traipsing vagabond' - Never thought of love that way --- 'til I loved you..... r poems.
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Date: 3/28/2024 11:56:00 AM
Profound poetry dear John, I really like how you did this one... lovely last stanza..
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Date: 3/27/2024 7:53:00 PM
Dear John, it is wonderful how you capture love's essence with poetic elegance. Like weathered bark, love holds tight to cherished moments, bearing witness to life's rhythms. I love how you paint love as a wandering spirit, stirring sensuality and awakening latent desires. Your artistic words evoke the gentle sway of emotions and the tender embrace of romantic encounters of love's timeless allure and the melodies it weaves in the fabric of existence. Truly, a captivating ode to the enigmatic nature of love. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/27/2024 6:04:00 PM
wow, fantastic poem. I especially liked "love, you traipsing vagabond Trailing your pheromonal tease Amidst the cloudless shadows I assume this is for the 'vagabond' contest. If so, you nailed it. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 3/27/2024 5:33:00 PM
Lovely! I like your verb lines… Very nice!
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