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Is It Not You That I Love- Collab With Dm

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She: (doubtful and fearful) You love me only when you see a smile When dancing in the breeze young and carefree It's only then you find what is worthwhile But you don't love what's there, the real me He: (reassuring) As the first morning rays shoot skyward Your smile breaks above the horizon of my heart Your face radiates joy, dark eyes prancing with delight Your wind song expanding the sails of my soul Is this not you that I love? She: (wanting to believe) You love me when I make you feel alright When you are sad and need a warm embrace You need me when you’re lonely in the night And then you ask to have my saving grace He: (reconfirming) Your love is my refuge, a sanctuary of goodness You drive away my fears, you dry my tears Gently I tend your garden singing lightly into the night Tongue tasting sweet love flavors upon my lips Is this not you that I love? She: (confident and assured) I am the one that you have made me be A fragile woman yet a woman strong The faith you have in me has set me free To be secure in love where I belong That's why it's you that I love A collaboration between David Meade and Jade Celeste

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/5/2015 9:17:00 AM

I enjoyed rereading this one Eileen! Have a great day and weekend.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/26/2015 4:46:00 PM

Hi Eileen! I have just read this on David's post; only fair that I place same comment on yours:) A top rating for a great collaboration! You two work very well together. I love how this romantic dialogue flows from doubt to assurance. Much enjoyed. All the best. // hugs ... paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/27/2015 5:41:00 PM

Thank you, Paul...That's how it is mean to be. Reassurance is a lovely gift to give someone in doubt. No matter how often needed....I'm happy to have your visit.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/25/2015 8:35:00 AM

I am impressed by both of you. I love the back and forth conversation, It drew me into the story. bravo a nd a big 7!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2015 10:14:00 AM

:) Thanks, Richard. I was worried about David not writing for a bit, so I send him two stanzas to get him going. We have two different styles and I like that because it shows two different voices. It was quick and easy. Enjoyed it. Hope all is well with you. Hugs...

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/25/2015 7:56:00 AM

What a brilliant colab by two brilliant poets. You both have a unique original way with words. How lucky we all are to be able to read you both!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2015 10:16:00 AM

I've missed you Maurice. Thanks for your many visits to my work today. You are a sweetie pie. :) Hugs Hugs Hugs

Shane Cooper

Date: 3/25/2015 7:16:00 AM

Wonderful collab my sweet. love Shane xxx

Shane Cooper
Date: 3/25/2015 5:05:00 PM

You are a caring woman my friend, I read your reply to Richard. love Shane.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2015 10:29:00 AM

Thank you, Shane. :) Much appreciated. I did enjoy working with David. Hugs

Tim Smith

Date: 3/24/2015 11:40:00 PM

Wow outstanding you two. To have real love over love of convenience I'd take real love anytime.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2015 10:33:00 AM

Real love is illusive, but once you find it...never let it go. Hugs

David Meade

Date: 3/24/2015 8:42:00 PM

Hey, this is a great poem . . . way to get me off my butt and write some words -- for that I am grateful! You are awesome Warrior Princess! Love and hugs LO. 7++

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2015 10:32:00 AM

Yes, David. You needed to get off your butt. I'm glad I gave you the incentive to write. I love reading you...so you best get going. I'm a Warrior Princess when I need to defend and help out my dear ones. ;) Hugs

Louis Brown

Date: 3/24/2015 7:54:00 PM

I love the colabo.it was deep keep coming with it,LB

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2015 10:33:00 AM

Thanks for the visit, LB. Glad you liked this piece.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/24/2015 4:16:00 PM

Sometimes We keep loving those who love no one but themselves,We keep trying to savour the crumbs of their heart,until someone comes into our life and give us the whole fresj bread of their heart..zIt may take time,but in the end we realize,why would we beg for crumbs when we have the tasty bbread.Love and security is here..at last we are complete. What a beauty of a poem dear friends.To my fvs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2015 12:30:00 PM

What a lovely comment. Yes, some people only give crumbs....while others give a feast. Why settle for crumbs? There are many answers to that question, my dear. Being complete is the ultimate goal our hearts strive for. Thanks for the lovely post. This poem is all about realizing and cherishing true love. Hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 3/24/2015 3:11:00 PM

a wonderful romantic collaboration Eileen and David :-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2015 10:38:00 AM

Thanks, sweetie. I sent him two stanzas and he responded. He hasn't been writing for while. Thought I'd give him a push. Hugs