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Into Your Beauty

I don't need an Eiffel Tower as my backdrop nor picture painted perfection gracing a Louvre romantic candlelit dinner elegance at a Casa Cruz nor a breathtaking view of The Old Man at Storr . . . to deliver all my heartfelt desire radiant red, smoldering, a slow stoke burning, for you, I am your fire and you, in all your brilliance are my flame dancing in every minute breeze seen and unseen felt in every crevice of my being spread in both dreams and reality wild and free sparks ignited in a heated destiny Time is now . . . pour out our stagnant waters no more pushing up daisies from the past rains, they come and they go washing away distance and here, into your beauty, I continue to fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/22/2018 11:55:00 PM
Loved this, lope isn't a place, is who you are with, and that can be in the middle of a corn field and it would be bliss!! :)
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Date: 5/22/2018 12:30:00 PM
- Like a beautiful love story, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/22/2018 11:44:00 AM
oh Tim this is an absolute joy to read - love the no more pushing up daisies from the past - wise advice indeed:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/22/2018 11:34:00 AM
How exquisitely beautiful, Tim. The nuanced finesse of your poetic lines is simply stunning and full of deep and meaningful imagery of love. I especially love your second and last stanzas - metaphorically lovely.. Brilliant and superb poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/22/2018 10:55:00 AM
Wow, a beautiful poem and I absolutely love how you ended it! Excellent Tim :)
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