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Into the Void

Into the void faint is the light Abyss of time, increase of night Objects shrink in expanse of space; hurtling forward, fears apace Pioneers on a wondrous flight Hopeful dreams glow distant star bright, hypersleep lulls temporal fright Thoughts move with null gravity grace Into the void Vacuum is bleak, empty the sight Oxy sustains, if dispensed right Awake to the unknown embrace, courage leaves an orbital trace Transmit that perils are not slight Into the void 09-11-21

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Date: 10/3/2021 10:19:00 AM
W O N D E R F U L L.
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Date: 9/13/2021 5:42:00 AM
Feel as if I am traveling with you. Great emotive write!
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Date: 9/12/2021 5:23:00 PM
I like the date at the end of the poem: 9/11 = into the void. Always has for me, since 20 years ago, anyway. Thanks, Fred.
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Date: 9/12/2021 10:31:00 AM
One need to be brave when entering the void, courageous you , I love your poetry today :)
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Date: 9/12/2021 8:56:00 AM
This is truly awesome Freddie. One of your best, giving voice to the void.
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Date: 9/11/2021 4:50:00 AM
Excellent Freddie . Well written. I hope all is well :)
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