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The moment when the farmhouse hit the ground my life in black and white was gone for good. A technicolor country I had found, a panning for the gold of Hollywood: In glitter dusted gown of pink chiffon a fairy floated in to break the news of how I’d killed a witch without a wand and earned myself a pair of ruby shoes. She pointed to a path of yellow brick extending to a town of emerald green. I skipped along in sparkling shoes so slick, the trees and wild flowers bent to see. My life is so much brighter for the spin from Kansas to the rainbow land I’m in. February 4, 2019 Movie Magic Poetry Contest Sponsored by Gregory R Barden Dorothy from The Wizard of Oz

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Date: 3/21/2019 9:40:00 AM
Rita, this was delightful! I have a great fondness for this movie, not only because I was born in norteast Kansas, but because sweet Judy brought the enchantment to life. Love the movie and your poem! Congratulations on your great second placement! : )
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Date: 6/3/2019 2:36:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 2/17/2019 8:27:00 PM
Impressive work Rita. I did not see the first poem, but I am clapping my hands and whistling for your "fixed" version. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/24/2019 6:33:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 2/13/2019 10:38:00 AM
Very clever take on the movie Rita - my only comment would be that I think it's supposed to be an English sonnet which would make the rhyme scheme ababcdcdefefgg and you haven't done that.
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Date: 2/13/2019 6:20:00 PM
Thanks, Craig. I fixed it.

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