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Into the Grass

Fresh and green grass farm Maiden walks freely at glance Footstep in cow's dung

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Lynn Marie

Date: 8/12/2016 3:45:00 PM

A sweet, humorous Haiku with imagery also evoking "scent"..lol Great writing. blessings, lynn

Len Gasun

Date: 8/1/2015 3:46:00 AM

Coming back to warmly Congratulate you on your win my very dear friend, Aiyah and to once again enjoy this wonderful winning piece of yours. Thank you, thank you so much. Many hugs and cheers! How are you? Hope you're doing well. I'm praying for you always. I'm also fervently praying that there will be no earthquake to visit our country. Tcare always. love lots and biggest hug, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2015 8:25:00 PM

glad to see this one again! Congrats.

Skat A

Date: 7/31/2015 1:27:00 PM

Aiyah, Congrats on your win. SKAT

Lee Carter

Date: 7/31/2015 8:16:00 AM

Congrats on your chuckle hiku win Aiyah! ~lee

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/30/2015 10:38:00 PM

Oh thats a brilliant take Aiyah!Congrats on big win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2015 2:40:00 PM

LOL, I bet this happens a lot. Aiyah :), Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my giggle haiku contest. I enjoyed reading every entry placed on the winning list. Stop by my latest blog "MY CAT" if you'd like or have the time. Yours Truly! ~LINDA~

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/25/2015 8:22:00 PM

Dear lovely friend, how are you? Nice scene beautifully pictured. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/31/2015 2:47:00 PM

a most remarkable 'ku; the ending was a punchline, aiyah... i like how this was well done.. wow talaga ang mga pinay!..how are you?.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/30/2015 8:44:00 AM

- Pops up on your side, dear friend Aiyah .... as a rabbit .... to say: HAPPY EASTER !!!! - big hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 3/29/2015 12:12:00 PM

Aiyah, yuk that would be terrible but sadly happens all the time when walking on the farm, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, my cat . . .

Len Gasun

Date: 3/24/2015 11:56:00 AM

Aweee!!! This is a great limerick my very dear friend, Aiyah! I can relate here :)))))). Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your kind visit on my poem. I am so sorry for the very late expression of gratitude because I was super busy at school. I'm having a day off starting tom. up to Sun. Seems not enough break for me esp that I brought home some assignments, but at least, I'll have more time to drop by here! Miss you, too! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora