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Place your head on my shoulder, let it stay there and we'll just breathe together in ...and... out Inhale positivity, exhale negativity- Pluck the sadness from the air, unravel that ball of worry... We'll find that knot that started it all, untangle it, and wave ribbons in the air We'll let those colors swirl around each other, we'll blend them... then weave them into a tapestry that comforts us in the end Doesn't matter at all if it turns out too short Our lives are full of tangles anyway, a lot of thread out there... So place your hand in mine, let it stay there, and we'll weave together ...in ...and... out... 03062011619p637

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Date: 6/3/2011 5:42:00 AM
congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/3/2011 5:13:00 AM
congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/2/2011 9:07:00 PM
Nikko,wow! I'm sorry i did not pay attention to my winners this morning... congratulations.... again... keep them comming... and also keep an eye... on all my contest.. i'm going for oldies and goodies for a whole month... and thanks always for joing,,, take care,..p.d.
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Date: 6/2/2011 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, nikko
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Date: 6/2/2011 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Nikko. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 8:26:00 AM
What a delightful read with its gentle flow. "Unravel that ball of worry". Great line in a great poem. Congratulations on your well-deserved placement, Nikki. You have the gift. :)
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Date: 6/2/2011 8:12:00 AM
congrats sweet friend Nikko on your fantastic firs place win in this contest..oh the beauty of this piece luv..enjoy top billing.. sweets..
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Date: 6/2/2011 7:46:00 AM
Congrats Nikko on your big win...enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 6/2/2011 7:18:00 AM
I do believe I would find comfort in having someone as dear as you, hold my hand through thick or thin...just a wonderful poem of inspiration ....love it!
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Date: 6/2/2011 6:38:00 AM
hooh,..napatunayan mo na naman na isa kang napaakagaling na makata...ahaha... a warm congratulations...so amazing... ang galing!!!!!! hope i'll be as great as you're....***jun-jun
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Date: 6/2/2011 6:37:00 AM
Beautiful. Many congrats, Nikko : )
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Date: 3/14/2011 5:09:00 PM
This is amazing, I love it.
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Date: 3/14/2011 10:24:00 AM
finally getting around to congratulating you. OINK. hahaha YOu DESERVED it. LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/10/2011 1:36:00 PM
great Poem and congrats..
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Date: 3/9/2011 7:10:00 AM
Beautiful - many congrats on being numero uno : ) Jack
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:03:00 AM
That is so lovely, tinged with sadness and hope. So glad I stumbled across it.
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:00:00 AM
Oh Nikko such a sweet message and adorable love in this dear. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 3/9/2011 3:53:00 AM
Hey Missy, I absolutely love this and no questions why this one deserves to be up there.. A favorite of mine for sure.. Congrats :) btw Wednesday's been awesome and yours? *hugs*
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Date: 3/9/2011 12:41:00 AM
Poetic write, so cool and reposeful read. Congratulations on your first place win, Nikko. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:17:00 PM
Congrats Nikko my dear friend on your first place win in Chris's contest .. awesome write and win luv.. enjoy ... my friend...
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Date: 3/8/2011 7:32:00 PM
This is wonderful Nikko, a well deserved winner congrats. Harry
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Date: 3/8/2011 6:24:00 PM
Nikko, congratulations on your top win in this contest. I enjoy reading this type of poetry. Love, gf
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Date: 3/8/2011 5:29:00 PM
There's such a soothing quality to this poem, Nikko. Very nicely done. Congratulations on your top win in Chris's contest!! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/8/2011 4:27:00 PM
thats lovely, congrats on your first place win Nikko
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Date: 3/8/2011 1:42:00 PM
Nikko, you earned the number one spot with unique creativeness. Congratulations to you.
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