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Inter the Cold

Fortress of peace ... dark entrance Graduated depths, steps icy No more emotional eruptions just volcanic slumber — Something inside has died Quiet brood ... at what price came this cursed silent relief? Left with only a lonely penance, seems the calculations weren’t heartfelt Wavy shadow movements increase Flickering regret moments, tears dripping ... briefly melting Arctic attitudes Aurora nightfall gives illuminated rest, as smouldering rage slowly cease Wind whispers listen at a frosty distance, creating such tranquil space Gathering calm beckons a cavern catacomb soul to go where another rappel elevated heart went Open mountain air ... no secret crevices for the solitude to hide Inter the cold, and let the cooling revive Let the northern exposure erase all of the igneous pain As the buried passion escape ... feel the snow peak kindled heat, and watch the bonding of the flames borealis rise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/2/2019 11:01:00 AM
This has a slowly gathering power that hisses out of a crack in the ice, like steam, in the last stanza! Amazing work! I love the fortress metaphor. Reminds me of an old SF movie, in which, the whole world is frozen.
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Date: 7/26/2018 5:07:00 AM
Love how you play nature into so much human emotion.. beautiful and brilliant, Freddie!
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Date: 7/25/2018 2:37:00 PM
Excellent Freddie. Great descriptions! Well done :) Have a nice day!
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Date: 7/25/2018 1:58:00 PM
So evocative and powerful, especially love "for the solitude to hide/Inter the cold, and let the cooling revive," the last stanza really gripped me, making this a fave!
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