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Inspired

A divine rhythm seeks us Our pristine, porous, childlike heart reciprocates Without fuss No thoughts decoy Inspiration never abates What joy Love’s kiss At heaven’s gates Bliss A divine rhythm seeks us Inspiration never abates Bliss

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Date: 12/24/2023 9:25:00 AM
Beautiful words chosen, what a great minuchi, US. Congratulations on your top win! Happy Holidays to you and yours, may all your wishes come true. ~Anaya
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Date: 12/24/2023 6:49:00 PM
Thank you, Anaya ~ wish you happy holidays with close ones
Date: 12/22/2023 11:05:00 AM
A wise and well written, Minichu, with the last stanza falling into place so perfectly as a wonderfully formed message. Just the way I believe Minichu's are meant to be. This is truly worthy of being a winner. Congrats.
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Date: 12/24/2023 6:47:00 PM
Than you, dear SV :)
Date: 12/22/2023 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations Seeker, on your well deserved win, very well crafted minichu, wishing you beautiful holidays.
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Date: 12/24/2023 6:47:00 PM
Thank you, dear IE ~ wish you an enjoyable festive season and a happy new year
Date: 12/22/2023 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend. All the best wishes for a happy holiday season and new year
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Date: 12/22/2023 7:48:00 AM
Thank you, SP ~ wish you joyous celebrations with loved ones
Date: 12/5/2023 4:05:00 PM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, Yes this poem inspires. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/6/2023 11:17:00 AM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, YOu are swelclom e. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 12/5/2023 9:19:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene :)

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