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Inner Joy Savored

The awakening of sunrise after nightfall has faded to soft light blue. A breaking of dawn once dense darkness has lightened into a gentle bright hue. Walking on the shore looking at the horizon and hearing crashing beach waves. Striding through wet sand catching a seafaring breeze while the incoming tide sways. Harmonizing to pleasant melodies in the relaxing hours of night. Humming a soothing tune to savor calm moments after long past the day's light. Relishing sounds of laughter among two siblings capturing their happy times. Cherishing lively minutes shared between brothers as they gladly sit and dine. Watching the sunset slowly fade in the distance as dusk settles upon sky. Solar heat passing behind the edge of ocean's cobalt stillness with a sigh.

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Date: 6/21/2013 8:48:00 PM
Debra, I am not sure about the form... but I love it .. very lovely, a beautiful sight to nature... a perfect 7 poem.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/22/2013 4:56:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your work it is light and is full of sincerity. Thank you for sharing a moment of stilled peacefulness.
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Date: 4/21/2013 7:52:00 AM
Lovely. You are so observant. I hope you enjoy the privilege of seeing all these wonderful things for many days to come. I hope I have the same luck.
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Date: 4/20/2013 2:23:00 PM
I really enjoyed how you took me through the day from dawn to dusk in a glorious poetic style! You have written a brilliant poem here Debra! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 4/11/2013 9:35:00 AM
Embracing the simple moments...wonderful!
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Date: 4/11/2013 8:24:00 AM
Very good write and I really enjoyed the flow and structure of the poem Good Job.
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Date: 4/11/2013 6:47:00 AM
..... written with love and warm thoughts. - Sharing with you: "Just A Kiss" - Have a beautiful day Debra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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