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Initially Yours

your monogrammed towel still hangs on the bathroom rack missing your strong hands now dry as an old stamp pad it no longer weeps your loss

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2012 2:17:00 PM

glad to see this one doing so well in a contest. susan. I know how much you think of this particular poem you wrote and it is a well deserved win you got. Congratulations.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/1/2012 3:10:00 AM

So sad and beautifully done Susan...congratulations on your win-Tim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/30/2012 2:25:00 PM

CONGRATS SUSAN ON ANOTHER FABULOUS WRITE AND WIN LUV .. BEYOND GOOD ENOUGH .. G R E A TTTT

Kash Poet

Date: 10/30/2012 1:35:00 PM

I have read it before ! a Gem from you Susan!Congrats on the win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2012 11:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Good Enough" contest. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Tanya Harrington

Date: 10/30/2012 11:19:00 AM

Expert write--love it. Congrats on your win. :) Tanya

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/30/2012 8:02:00 AM

Big congratulations on your win Susan xx

Len Gasun

Date: 10/30/2012 7:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win my dear Susan! hugs:) LG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/30/2012 6:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Good Enough" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Joseph May

Date: 10/30/2012 6:27:00 AM

congrats on your win Susan

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/29/2012 8:54:00 PM

Wonderful and to the point. congratulations on your win. Love, joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/29/2012 8:21:00 PM

Hi Miss Susan,,, miss forgetfulness ;-) .. Congratulations with your wonderful and "Good Enough" poem in Sandy's contest. xox~PD

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 10/29/2012 7:19:00 PM

Nice win Susan' :-) SandyIvy

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/17/2012 9:01:00 AM

STUPENDOUS WRITE!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2012 11:25:00 PM

Susan, a huge congratulations to you. And I know how much you like this poem of yours. It's one of your best!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/4/2012 11:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this great tanka. I love the poem and the title, too! Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2012 6:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 173" Susan. Love, Carol

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/4/2012 12:37:00 AM

Awsome Tanka Susan! the depth is stunning! I love it! big hugs love, deb...Congratulations on your well deserved win!! :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/3/2012 9:58:00 PM

Are you kidding?...I love this completely!! The title adds sophistication to an already well crafted theme...Superb bathroom poetry, my dear Susan...Nathan knew what he was doing when he chose this as a winner! Great job. Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/3/2012 8:49:00 PM

Congrats! Susan, a fine and wonderful tanka.. glad Nate, enjoyed your poem. it was a super shock to see he only chose 3 winners... I thought I told him the last time his actions reflect on me. But, oh well. It was very rude to see he is very selffish.. I don't see why he only picked 3 poems. I can't win when we fight or debate over these kind of situations. However a little birdy told me he should be more supportive over us poets. He's right I knew he would love my entry~ "edge walker" That poem is his favorite. :-)... once again.. a super congrats.. always... pd

Diana-Marie Bombardieri

Date: 5/3/2012 9:37:00 AM

Congrats on your well desrved win! The title is sooooo appropriate! loved it!

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 5/3/2012 9:31:00 AM

Awesome title for a splendid write.....congrats on your win!

Nathan D.

Date: 5/3/2012 8:38:00 AM

much like many other stupid forms i hate the tanka and yet you have written a good poem using this form. i like the concept of it. transfer the pain of loss into towel and using its inderference to try to get over the loss. its very concsise i wouldnt change a word of it. grats on your win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2012 6:30:00 PM

AWESOME, you got on the winners list (I didn't haha. Can't even remember what I submitted) Anyway, big congrats to you.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/20/2012 2:39:00 PM

Sad but sweet. Congratulations. Love, Joyce