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Infinite Strings

Running on a few hours of sleep, I decide that this is a good time as any to empty out my thoughts tilt my head to the right and let everything flow out of my ear into a bucket *whoosh* just like that~ then pour everything down down d o w n the drain.... swirl, swish, swirl it goes, *glurg*, *glurg* and then a *hiccup!* What the heck is that? something got stuck and it just won’t go down? So I remove my glasses stare at the drain, look at it closely, and blink— a string?! I tug, tug, tug at it hard to free it and to push it down but hmm maybe I pulled too hard and that drain thingy goes flying -- >pop< *boink!*and hits me on the forehead! Figures! Ouchy! Then all of a sudden, it gets sucked down that vortex slurrrp……dragging me along~ I go through that canal, flailing arms & legs swimming (ok not really, more like sliding!) and I grasp at nothing and everything at the same time but my foot gets snagged on something and I get thrown smack, face down on mush! ewwwww this reminds me of baby food, which leads me to think of babies and umbilical cords Sure is weird that we come into this world attached to somebody but we are severed from it at the start although not really, because there are always, always ties that bind us whether we like or not, there is this ----S—t—r—i—n—g---- that connects us all together Infinite Strings …my brother comes to mind, since his business name had that phrase, it was an acronym – ISIP— which in Tagalog would mean “mind” or “think” now this got me thinking , of how this string is infinite, invincible, invisible that even if we try to cut it off, we just can’t… and I think that’s for the best… since it ties us down, to make sure that even if we’re afloat in this universe, seemingly detached we’re still grounded somewhat… yeah, the string might get tangled and the knots can be nightmares to untie but I guess that's what also makes life interesting and challenging somebody or something just needs to tug at it, take us back to reality and bring us to our senses People in our lives come and go, tugging at our heartstrings, stringing us along, or pulling us together always, the strings remain subtle reminders that we are all connected... I tie that string around my pinky finger now, happy I never let go and that it got stuck in the first place, refusing to go down that drain not lost to infinity, but infinitely staying with me...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/3/2011 7:21:00 AM
ok, yes, I have read this one and really enjoyed it. Nikko, I want to thank you for reading so many of my poems for today. Except for you and a few others, they were my only comments and I appreciate it. Yesterday traffic made me late for work. NOT today. I better GO. luv, andrea
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Date: 5/1/2011 8:10:00 AM
Simply marvelous! This wonderful write rolls on and on and on...first the sounds pop and boink and all. Then about the strings, emotions..you've beautifully put them into words nikko, they really tug at your heart strings, even here on PS it feels like every one has known each other for years ,like really known and not just here...Love you dear for sharing this superb work...
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Date: 4/29/2011 12:21:00 AM
Nikko, this must be the one that kept giving you troubles to post. Yes, it's so long. did you have to delete parts of it to make it all fit? It's very steam of consiciousness. Is it for Deb's contest? I really enjoyed this travel thru your wild and crazy mind, sweetie! sorry you lost that one poem the other day!
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Date: 4/29/2011 12:13:00 AM
Quite an amusing read. Of course I'd think of earwax when I got to the part where you tilted your head...that and when water gets in your ear sometimes..it feels good to let it all flow out. I suppose you've always wanted to write that line about emptying out your head? I've always wanted to pluck out an eyeball and soak it in alcohol...but that's different. We are all connected, yes indeed, to others more so to a point it sometimes gets sort of creepy and weird.
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:28:00 PM
I love this. The first part made me laugh so hard (I think I needed that) and the second part is a jewel of a thinking. Thank you for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 4/28/2011 4:26:00 PM
OMG...this is sheer genius......seriously....this is about as good as it gets! That first part had me hooked...and then when you s-t-r-u-n-g it all together...and ended with such a provocative and insightful, introspective poem....you are amazing Nikko...I think even better poet than you know!! LOVE it!!
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Date: 4/28/2011 2:47:00 PM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! You had me at....emptying your brain out in the drain. This reminds me of a Siverstein-like poem. It has motion and it draws the reader to the end lickety split. Are u sure you won't consider publishing some of the kid's poems at least? I love this one. thanks for reading Shanghai Cricket. I have the book u mentioned on the shelf at home-unread!
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Date: 4/28/2011 2:04:00 PM
LOL well Alice and the Rabbit hole have NOTHING on you my little monkey! Yes it did ramble its way around to an internal monolog! The beginning was pure fantasy! Light & Love
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Date: 4/28/2011 2:00:00 PM
Gurrr! I knew it... lol... you know I can actually see you tilting your head... to empty out your mind.. poor bucket... LOL.. and by the way I don't think that was a string... its more like the energy that binds us to our brain.. and boy can yours do wonders... and the ending is just cute... I can see u with the reminder ... and a smile... LOL.. no no no... connected... lol.. laterz... p.d.
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Date: 4/28/2011 1:34:00 PM
We are all interconnected; the umbilical cord to the universal consciousness remains long after our birth. What an interesting poem, Nikko! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/28/2011 12:23:00 PM
Sweet dreams Missy, will email you a pic of the Gatsby lol ;) *hugs*
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Date: 4/28/2011 12:06:00 PM
No wonder you were perplexed about your poem disappearing Missy, this is awesome, quite enjoyed it tonight.. So many to highlight Chris touched on my favourite bit as well ;) oh yeah finally got that email away as well *hugs* ;) glad you could finally post it!
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