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Dawning never lasts Snowflakes melt like history Beauty grieves on graves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/20/2017 10:37:00 AM
As delicate as Irish lace.
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Date: 7/29/2017 4:20:00 PM
Very sad and well-written Haiku, WW. Nicely done! Regards, John.
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Date: 7/11/2017 6:51:00 AM
Hello Mr. White Wolf. The format is executed with perfection. Your theme is marvelous. And yes, everything say poetry. Your expression here is poetic starting with the title. Honestly. Read back your words and you will see the poeticness. Well done entirely. Have a wonderful night.
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Date: 7/11/2017 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Lisa! For your encouraging words tonight /|\
Date: 7/11/2017 6:13:00 AM
Sadly beautiful my friend. This is deep and affecting, touching many who read I am sure. Really nice.
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Date: 7/11/2017 6:26:00 AM
Thank you, Chris /|\
Date: 7/11/2017 4:04:00 AM
Excellent Haiku WW, probably one of the best that I have read, brilliant, :))
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Date: 7/11/2017 4:09:00 AM
Thank you very much, Roy /|\
Date: 7/11/2017 3:52:00 AM
Excellent flow in this Haiku.
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Date: 7/11/2017 4:09:00 AM
Thanks a lot /|\
Date: 7/11/2017 2:34:00 AM
Superbly written my friend, WW!
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Date: 7/11/2017 2:40:00 AM
Thank you very much, Demetrios /|\
Date: 7/10/2017 10:34:00 PM
Beautiful in its twist of words.
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Date: 7/11/2017 2:38:00 AM
Thank you, Kim /|\

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