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In This Land

In this land there is a mighty voice that can sing a mighty song. Often it is a song of I don’t belong and all sort of other things that are wrong. This mighty voice can herald itself in the grateful praise of being strong. All while asking what else is to be spawn in a struggle to do no wrong. Should it be we shall live in all eternal knowing wrong being strong. It is God’s place to be so strong and to know all wrong. So it is in praise to him we should knell as we spawn our grateful song. There is one more thing in his Love eternal song We all belong.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/28/2016 3:21:00 PM
Your poetry reminds me of my poetic Style. I loved the Patriotic poem very well written very well enjoy it thank you.
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John Hardison
Date: 7/29/2016 9:28:00 PM
Thanks much for your comment. It is one of my favorites. Think it has a needed strong voice. Peace, Love and Joy.
Date: 6/3/2016 10:33:00 PM
Your message rings true, John. I wish more people would not only accept it, but practice it.
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John Hardison
Date: 7/29/2016 9:34:00 PM
Thought I had replied some time ago. Thanks much for your comment. Excuses the over sight. Share you sentiments. Peace, Love and Joy
Date: 7/13/2015 3:58:00 PM
that last three words are a perfect little rhyming end to this sweet poem.
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John Hardison
Date: 7/13/2015 7:07:00 PM
Thanks much for your reply. We all seem to have the same sort of mornful cry. We need to belong and be strong. Peace, Love and Joy his gift.
Date: 1/8/2015 8:17:00 PM
Very beautiful pen John ! Enjoyed very much your nice piece here dear friend! A 7 from me! Wishing you the best in 2015! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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John Hardison
Date: 1/14/2015 11:53:00 PM
TYFC. Everyone wants a mighty voice. So let the land have it.

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