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In This Garden

This place is full of wonder, full of great sites A walk in the blissful rays of colored lights Take me by the hand and pleasure my sensory Tickle my nose with the smell of your fragrancy Your tranquility calms me to a state of awe I could look at you for days and not find any flaw Even though mistakes can be made The site of you makes those mistakes fade Have you ever wondered how your soul can wander? Bump into each other from far beyond yonder? Did you ever see the beauty in me? Even at my worst could you really see? A shadow of truth, which dwells within these walls A Utopian garden of truth, which an empty voice calls Delving in the interior I can only be amazed By all of the pretty things about you; my feelings are raised Mesmerized by your being; intellectual with insight I know that together we will only burn bright The empty yard is now filled with dreams Covering the persistence of my piercing screams A hollow body has been filled A terrible angst has been killed And my imagination has now been thrilled So all we can do from here is build Still yet, I wonder as I gaze into your radiant eyes The twists and turns are for frequent surprise As I get to know you further for who you are You have given me reason to believe we are up to par Driven in ways to get the chance to make you mine I could not give you up, for which you are particularly devine Within my limits, for I have chose I confess that I want you, the alluring rose In this garden which you appease All of our sorrows will begin to seize Love is a feeling, it can feel like rain The drops can be refreshing, or bring lots of pain I know with you we can be as one Take a walk in this garden where we won't have to run I will always remain with you, from dusk until dawn Just imagine someone there for you, someone who will never be gone. Written on July 6th, 2016 and posted on July 7th, 2016. By: Michelle Corbin

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Date: 8/25/2016 8:13:00 PM
Michelle, a free write, lets loose a beautiful spirit! nice work! jim
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 9/28/2016 11:40:00 AM
Thank you so much!!
Date: 8/10/2016 4:31:00 AM
This is beyond romantic...it was as if I was there along side of you cherishing and inhaling every word. The tone of your write and the flow is to perfection. Enjoyed reading this fabulous write...please post more!!!!
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 8/11/2016 7:41:00 AM
Thank you so much! I'm working on another... similar piece, just different genre like not so romantic lol. But, hopefully people will enjoy it!
Date: 7/31/2016 12:21:00 PM
Michelle, the title caught my attention...i tend to relate a garden to everything wonderful about life. your poem is exceptional.....made me feel again. love your writing style!
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 8/9/2016 8:20:00 PM
Awww thank you SO much! That made my day! I am so glad one of my pieces was able to make you feel again <3 Best feelings are to feel :) XOXO
Date: 7/28/2016 8:59:00 AM
- Sounds like a lovely garden ("A Utopian garden of truth"), lovely poem Michelle - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 7/28/2016 11:21:00 AM
So thoughtful of you to comment <3 Glad you enjoyed this one! Xoxo
Date: 7/13/2016 9:50:00 AM
Lovely poem Michelle, every word gives a beautiful description of the garden. #7.
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 7/21/2016 4:53:00 AM
I'm so glad you think so! Thank you so much, and glad my garden was descriptive enough for you :) <3
Date: 7/10/2016 11:19:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem...such a beautiful garden...well done Michelle...god bless...^WW^
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 7/21/2016 4:52:00 AM
So sweet of you, thank you for reading! Xoxo!
Date: 7/7/2016 1:47:00 AM
nicely written...
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 7/7/2016 1:55:00 AM
Thank you so much!!

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