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In the Wake

weathered with time the old rocker sat on the porch slightly creaking she drew the blinds steadfast as the storm approached with every flash she saw years of life pass on by as if a movie playing before her eyes she felt the thunder pounding as it echoed within her chest she could feel the chill of air with every winded breath as she closed her eyes to the darkness of night weathered with time she lies still in the wake of her life

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Date: 8/9/2021 12:02:00 PM
Beautiful use of symbolism and metaphor Sandra! Congratulations! Wonderful to, once again, read your oh so creative writing and be touched by it. Blessings and a hug.
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Date: 8/9/2021 1:51:00 AM
I think that this poem qualifies as being 'sufficiently woke' for a win in Brian's contest! Rock on! ~ Gershon
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Date: 8/1/2021 10:50:00 AM
A sad well written poem Sandra, it was so lovely hearing from after such a while, I hope you are keeping well and look forward to communicating with you once more. Take care my friend, Blessings and hugs Jennifer.
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Date: 7/22/2021 8:27:00 AM
Excellent imagery... I was sad in the end... Well written. Ann
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Date: 7/22/2021 5:22:00 AM
I see this is a winner, not surprising. You have a way of conveying such deep emotions. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/21/2021 1:34:00 PM
A rather fine piece Sandy, great to have you back on board for you're truly missed especially by me! Take care, hugs and blessings, Gordon
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Date: 7/21/2021 6:04:00 AM
I knew there was something I missed about this place and this is it. Your beautiful poetry always touched me and this is no exception. Beautifully done my friend.
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Date: 7/17/2021 9:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win, it's a very moving poem.
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Date: 7/17/2021 1:03:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine write.
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Date: 7/17/2021 12:20:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me reflective, nostalgic, and yes, prayerful to be ready when I will be summoned by my Creator... God bless you.
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Date: 7/16/2021 7:06:00 PM
Congrats on this very find piece.
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Date: 7/16/2021 2:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write. I love old rockers on a porch. A great way to sit and remember the past. Have a blessed day with your win............
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Date: 7/12/2021 5:55:00 AM
"she lies still in the wake of her life"... A very poignant verse on aging and facing death. Your ink is pure gold, Sandy. Hugs, John
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Date: 7/11/2021 5:27:00 PM
I love this, Sandy. It's beautiful. A breath of inspiration. Love it. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 7/11/2021 6:25:00 AM
Time goes by so quickly Sandra before we know it we're looking back wondering how much more we can look ahead. Enjoy your weekend, hope you are well. Tom
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Date: 7/10/2021 10:34:00 PM
A sad poem in a way. Your life is one big storm and who can blame you. This year has begun with such storms for me. So I relate. Hugs.
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